Febuary

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Their march could be considered a legendary and a common affair. Rowdy warriors tumultuously inciting discord, making their way through the minds of many.

Ancient ghosts lurk in the shadows, their touch aggravating, their presence directing.

They need to stop the march of Fe(feelings) b(found) for (Sanc)uary.

I dispatch onlookers to line the streets and control the warriors on their march. Their destination unknown but their instructions clear.

Old feelings send their tendrils out to steer, making spaces between my crowd of watchers, common folk "cheering" thoughts of discontent. These ancient feelings are bound to the sanctuary.

The warriors are bound for sanctuary.

The constant battle of control. Simple moments turn into wars, behind quiet smiles and silent eyes. Those bound by Sanctuary plot its demise.

Dreemport Word of the Week Topic: Sanctuary



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Lovely description of the word "Sanctuary"
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Those bound by Sanctuary plot its demise.

Let's hope they don't succeed! Without a sanctuary, the warriors won't be ready to protect the kingdom!

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What the heck happened to my comment on your post? I am reading this again for dreem-wotw grading and was looking at the engagement and my comment from yesterday...* - aargh... it didn't post! Damnit... lol 😂😣🤨 hm! oh well...

This feels as if it has been written in layers... the literal protest march with rising anger and discord amongst mobbish behaviour on the street, needing to be shepherded and subdued before reaching the sanctuary... and the metaphorical march on the sanctuary that is our mind and our soul, whereby external forces continue to lurk, invade, make efforts at mind control in an effort to subvert the sanctuary within us all. Now... whether it was written with that in mind or not? I have no idea... but you cleverly disguise poetry as prose here and therefore I think there is some intention to use more creative licence and indulge a little in metaphorical language to make some interesting statements. Y'all gonna tell me I'm overthinking it, bat shit crazy, and that it's just a shitpost! 🤣 But I am going to retort with... once the ink leaves the writing Pen, the words belong to the reader, and they make of them what they will 💗 !LUV !ALIVE !PIZZA

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