The right to rule Andor and rescue the Forsaken

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Over time, even a small increase in return is multiplied many times over. And the growth of the kingdom had been nothing short of spectacular. The number of people living within its borders had doubled every ten years for three hundred years, and now it was home to more than two million souls.

The first thing that struck Nynaeve al'Meara when she entered the room was how clean it was. Everything was immaculately polished and dusted, with fresh flowers placed at each table. It looked like a place where business was conducted, not a place where men drank and argued about politics. She knew that wasn't right; she'd seen drunken soldiers and merchants before. But this felt different. This felt... better.

She turned toward the back wall, which displayed maps of all the known nations on Randland. There were a few names she recognized: Emond's Field, her village, was marked as such. There was also a large black spot on the map, just above Tar Valon. The Dark One's handprint.

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Nynaeve took a seat near the head of one of the tables, where a woman who looked to be no older than twenty-five sat waiting. Her hair was pulled back into a tight bun, and she wore an expression of boredom. Nynaeve wondered if she had ever smiled or laughed. She would have bet good money that she hadn't.

"I'm sorry we're late," Nynaeve said, "but I hope you weren't expecting only one of us."

The young woman raised a perfectly groomed eyebrow. "You are Nynaeve al'Meara?"

"Yes."

"And your companion is Elayne Trakan", she said pointing to an already sitting lady.

Elayne stood up, smiling broadly.

"We've heard so much about you!"

"As well you should," the woman replied, looking between them. "You are the most powerful Aes Sedai in recent memory. You both carry the same name, yet you bear no resemblance to each other. How did this happen?"

"We don't know," Nynaeve said. "Our parents died when we were very young, and we grew up together. We never learned who our father was, but our mother was from the Two Rivers."

"And what happened after that?" the woman asked.

"We went to the White Tower," Elayne said. "We trained there, then left and came here. We didn't know who we were, but we knew we needed to find out."

"That is a story I wish to hear," the woman said. "Please, sit down."
They sat.

"It is my understanding," the woman continued, "that you both bear the same name. Is this true?"

"Yes," Nynaeve said. "But I'm not certain why. I think it has something to do with the fact that we both share the same birth date. It doesn't seem to matter what day we were born, though; we can both channel the One Power."

"Interesting," the woman said. "Why haven't you used it?"

"I have," Nynaeve said. "When I fought the Dark One during the War of the Shadow. I nearly lost control of it, though. It was only because of the bond between us that I managed to pull myself back."

"What about you, Elayne?" the woman asked.

"I've never really tried," Elayne admitted. "I always assumed I couldn't".

"Then why did you leave the Tower?"

"Because I didn't want to die,"

Elayne said. "If I hadn't left, they would have killed me."

"And what of you?" the woman asked.

"You were there. You saw what they did. Why didn't you try to stop them?"

"I was afraid," Nynaeve said. "I thought if I tried to fight them, I'd fail. They'd kill me."

"That makes sense," the woman said.

"Very well. Now that we understand each other, I will tell you why I called you here today."

"We're listening," Nynaeve said.

"You are powerful," the woman said.

"Both of you. More powerful than any sisters in the last five hundred years. Your strength is matched only by your intelligence. You are wise beyond your years. You are strong enough to stand against the strongest of the Forsaken and clever enough to figure out a way to defeat them. You are two of the most powerful women in the world, and yet you have lived a life of relative obscurity. Why is that?"

"I don't know," Nynaeve said. "I've never really considered it."

"Neither have I," Elayne added. "It just seems that way."

"Well, consider it now," the woman said. "You are important, both of you. You are the first Aes Sedai in five centuries to bear the name Trakand. You are linked by blood and fate. You are the only ones who could possibly claim the throne of Andor."

"The throne of Andor?" Nynaeve asked. "But we're from the Two Rivers."

"You may be from the Two Rivers, but you are Rand al'Thor's kin. His half-sisters. That means you are of royal lineage. The people of the Two Rivers love you as their own daughters. You have a duty to them. You must rule Andor."

"Ruling?" Nynaeve asked. "Me? What does ruling even mean?"

"Think of it this way," the woman said. "A king rules over his kingdom, and his kingdom is ruled by him. He decides how to run it, who to give positions of power to, and what laws he wants to enforce. It is a complicated system, but the point remains: a ruler controls the kingdom, and the kingdom exists for the benefit of the rulers."

"But I'm not a queen," Nynaeve protested. "I'm just a simple village girl."

"Queen or not, you are a member of the royal line," the woman said. "You are descended from the Dragon Reborn. That gives you the right to rule Andor."

"But I don't want to rule Andor!"

Nynaeve exclaimed. "I've spent my entire life trying to avoid that sort of responsibility. Why should I have to take on such a burden?"

"Because you are Rand al'Thor's kin," the woman said. "His blood runs through your veins. Because you are Aes Sedai. And because you are strong enough to do what needs to be done."

Nynaeve looked at Elayne. "Do you see what she's saying?"

Elayne nodded. "She thinks we're strong enough to lead Andor."

"No," Nynaeve said. "She doesn't think that. She knows it."

"You are the only ones who can do it," the woman said. "And you are the only ones who can stop the Shadow."

"Stop the Shadow?" Nynaeve asked.

"What do you mean?"

"It is coming, Nynaeve," the woman said. "Soon, it will come to pass. I have seen it. I know what is going to happen. I know that you are the only ones who can prevent it."

"How?" Nynaeve asked. "What do we need to do?"

"There is a man named Moghedien," the woman said. "He is one of the Forsaken. He has been searching for something called the Horn of Valere.

The horn is the key to the Last Battle, the final battle between the Shadow and the Light. The Forsaken seek to use it to open the Dark One's prison, to free him. If they succeed, the end of the world will begin."

"That sounds bad," Nynaeve said.
"It is very bad," the woman agreed. "I cannot let the Forsaken have the horn. I am not strong enough to face them alone. The Last Battle will require every ounce of strength the world has to offer. Only you and Elayne can save us. You must go to Tear, where Moghedien is hiding. Find the horn, and destroy it."

"Tear?" Nynaeve asked. "Why would we go to Tear?"

"Because that is where the Forsaken are," the woman said. "They are waiting for you there."


PS: You know how the Cinderella and Sleeping Beauty story has been retold over and over again in different forms, settings, and contexts. This is the exact thing I tried to do with this story. You could say, this was inspired by the book character, Nynaeve al'Meara, in the Wheel of Fate.

You can read summarizes and other descriptions I picked up from the internet here and here.



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I do wish we knew if they were successful :) ...

This post has been manually curated by the VYB curation project

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I am so sorry but I'll allow your imagination run wild on that one. (I always have issues completing a story and I hope you'll forgive me)

Thanks for the curation. I appreciate.

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In this case, you might have wanted to give us a little less information, and focused more on the actual encounter with the woman :) ...

Here's a great post that might help you next time - please keep the great stories coming 🙌

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@theinkwell/writing-tip-8-what-is-a-story-arc-hive-170798

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Yeah

Thanks for the resource.. I'll go over it again and again. I am sure it will help. Thanks again.

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My pleasure :) Mine tend to go long too, so I have to watch that for my Inkwell stories. Otherwise I just continue the story later in a new post 🙌

!ALIVE

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I understand. Plus, inkwell doesn't support multiple stories (series) right?

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Plus, inkwell doesn't support multiple stories (series) right?

Right, which really pushed me into learning how to write better :) I'm still working at it, but I'm a lot happier with my skills now thanks to The Inkwell team 🙌

The more you practice, the better the results :) It takes work to convey what is already in your head.

!LOL

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Dear my lady @iskawrites !
I guessed you were writing a European fantasy novel.
I felt that you had excellent insight, wisdom, and persistence in finance, economy, and money!
However, I felt that you did not have enough imagination and writing skills to write European fantasy novels! 😁

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Haha.... You are always placing a nail on my heart no matter which angle I turn. 😃

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Dear my charmig lady @iskafan!
Please forgive my American elementary school student honest and direct English expression!

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Lol. I don't take any offense. It just makes me want to do better. So, don't worry yourself.

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I appreciate your generosity!😄
By the way, I still have a problem with the wrong expression of flattery in English!😂
I wish you happiness and health!

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This is beautifully written and very compelling, @iskawrites. You've given the main character a great personality and intriguing attributes. It has the feel of the beginning of a longer work, and you leave us wanting more! But of course there is only so much one can fit into a short story.

As for retelling stories, we do have rules around that. We won't enforce it here, since you've done such an amazing job of making the story unique and bringing this lore to life in an original way. But please do review our rules, as we ask our community members to write 100% unique stories. Thank you!

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Thank you.

As for retelling stories, we do have rules around that. We won't enforce it here, since you've done such an amazing job of making the story unique and bringing this lore to life in an original way. But please do review our rules, as we ask our community members to write 100% unique stories. Thank you!

I'll do just that. Thanks for letting me off this time 🥺

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Wow, I was really drawn into this story! You have a very nice way of writing dialog, and keeping the story moving with scenes.

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Thanks, Jayna. I'll just keep learning how to bring a story to an end 😩

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This is incredible writing Iska! I got mesmerized just by reading. Well done!

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The strong women would have to battle with their fate again.

No wonder while reading it was like I am watching a movie. The imaginary view in my head.

You have made a nice write my friend. Thanks for sharing

With love ❤️
Pirate Q from dreemport

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I love this exit phrase of yours, Pirate Q. It's unique and cool.

Thanks for appreciating my story. ❤️

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Always welcomed. Can’t wait to read more from you…

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you may have to consider a different name for your land/kingdom. Disney is very protective of its 'property' and will likely take a dim view of Andor being used outside of their parameters.

beyond that this is a solid establishing section giving us detail of both characters and events without feeling like an info dump

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Oh jeez... I could be in a lot of trouble. I'll just edit this later.... Thanks for pointing that out.

Thanks for your appreciation too. I appreciate you.

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At this point no need to worry, and in edits the 'search and replace' function will do the hard work.

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This is some nice Merlin shiiiiiit! Woo! I love this honestly and don't listen to that gold guy. You are doing just great babe. You would, with time, polish your skills and wow us like you do with your financial write ups love. I'm rooting for you honey!
Dreemport!

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and don't listen to that gold guy.

Hahaha.... I laughed at this part... Damn!!! 😂😂

Thanks so much for believing in me sweetie. 🙈

I won't let you down... 🙌🙌

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Thus is really a great writing skill you displayed here... Well articulated and captivating.

I really enjoyed this piece .. this was really nice just that I wished I saw the end
Popped in via @dreemport

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Wow...this is so nice story my queen 👑, very nice to serve as a novel, I got glued while reading but the end? Are we expecting another episode? Lolz 😅
Good job my dear ❤️

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This is awesome. Something different that I haven't read from you before and you did awesomely. I love your dialogues. They keep it going creatively. I saw a discouraging comment. Don't even bother to read it twice. Go on girl.

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Uhh, I wish they are successful in defeating the shadows and become great queens.

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