Inmensidad bravía (Soneto) || Brave immensity (Sonnet) ✨

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Saludos comunidad, Literatos.

Inmensidad bravía

Mi ser se estremece con tus paisajes,
eres menjurje de querer fecundo,
sabana, llanura al igual que fundo,
embrujo de delicias tus forrajes.

Mi llano es intrigante y maniobrero,
rebosante de leyendas e historias,
supersticiones relatan memorias,
creencias de un sentir aventurero.

Sonatas llaneras, coplas de amor,
sentir de aromas, sabor a rocío,
arraigos de sol y luna es candor.

La llanura pide faena y brío,
al cantar de gallos, a la labor,
tributo a este territorio bravío.

Gracias por su visita


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Greetings community, Literatos.

Brave immensity

My being trembles with your landscapes,
you are a mixture of fertile desire,
savannah, plains as well as the deep,
your fodder is a spell of delights.

My plain is intriguing and maneuverable
brimming with legends and stories,
superstitions tell memories,
beliefs of an adventurous feeling.

Llanera songs, love couplets,
a sense of aromas, a taste of dew,
roots of sun and moon is candor.

The plains call for a fight and vigor,
to the cock crowing, to the work,
tribute to this brave territory.

Thank you for your visit

Respected reader: this poetic composition (Sonnet) was originally conceived in my mother tongue, Spanish. Occasionally, when translated into another language, variations in rhythm and metrical scheme occur, which could modify the original poetic structure. It was used for the translation of this poem https://www.deepl.com

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La fotografía es de @marilour
14 de Enero de 2024

The photograph is by @marilour
January 14, 2024



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@sirenahippie says - This is a beautiful sonnet, very heartfelt, done with great love.

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Thank you so much for the appreciation and support @sirenahippie and @sagarkothari88. My gratitude.
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@marilour you're most welcome

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Muy bien logrado este soneto, tanto en la métrica como en la rima, con un vocabulario que se corresponde en mucho con la vida en los llanos venezolanos que, es lo que describe acertadamente la temàtica: la vida en los llanos y de los llaneros. Muy bien construido el segundo cuarteto que define espiritual y emocionalmente el llano. Saludos desde Caracas bella @marilour

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Your sonnet "Inmensidad bravía" is a captivating portrayal of the beauty and spirit of the landscape. The vivid imagery and heartfelt verses create a deep connection with the reader, allowing them to feel the essence of the plains and the emotions within. Your mastery of language and poetic expression shines through, making it a truly delightful read. 🌟📜

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Hi @nion24 it's nice to meet you. Thank you for your presence I appreciate it. Your exquisite and heartfelt words brighten my senses. Grateful for your appreciation, my gratitude.
Happy week, many successes in this wonderful multiverse called Hive.
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¡@almajandra! Has recibido un aporte en $LOTUS de parte de @marilour.

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