RE: Hive feature film 1st draft review

almost 4 years ago

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Wow this is a great review man, I'm really glad you like the script and are happy with how things are shaping up. I'll deffinatly be making not of your thoughts on the noob characters introduction to the space, I don't want it to be heavy handed, boring or feel like an advert. Thanks so much for your review, it'll be a huge help in striving to make sure this script is as good as it can be!

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almost 4 years ago

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@basilmarples 65

almost 4 years ago

hey no problem man. You've done a great job so far. Happy to be able to contribute in whatever way I can. I VERY much look forward to seeing the next installment ;)

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@killerwot 74

almost 4 years ago

I look forward to everyone reading the next part too! Also, it'l be great to make some changes to this first draft down the line which gets us closer to where we want to be with it!

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@basilmarples 65

almost 4 years ago

exactly. dont even think about changing stuff yet, just plough on and we'll workshop the hell out of it when the full script is complete

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