kaerpediem in #hive-170798 • 2 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersCircumstances bringing two strangers together and a connection is made I wonder if there will be more to the relationship or will they just be a memory for each other... Enjoyed the storydeeanndmathews in #hive-170798 • 3 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersThis is a magnificent story. The only thing I need to mention is to watch your tenses ... there is a little shifting between the present and the past tense that is confusing.…agmoore in #hive-170798 • 3 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersHello @bruno-kema, I am delighted to see your story here. As usual, you spin a good yarn. In this case, there is not a lot of action to drive the story forward. You have to…jayna in #hive-170798 • 3 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersHappy to help, @bruno-kema. Your comment made me smile. Looking forward to reading the final draft!gracielaacevedo in #hive-170798 • 3 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersGreetings, @bruno-kema! You have chosen the moment of a street riot to make two strangers meet. The atmosphere is well described, surely the characters know what is going on…dwixer in #ecency • 3 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersThank You for considering the suggestionsjayna in #hive-170798 • 3 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersHi @bruno-kema. So glad you're participating in the contest! I see you have already received some nice feedback. I will add a few suggestions to the mix. Your story line is…stormcharmer in #hive-170798 • 4 days agoRE: Just Another DayI always hope to be here for good. Life throws curveballs, at times. 😅 But I had to come visit my friend, @bruno-kema!dwixer in #hive-170798 • 4 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersIt was a nice story there, you started by introducing to us the time and the settings which was believed to be in the evening, and did well to paint that feature of recognition.…theinkwell in #hive-170798 • 4 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersWelcome to the contest, @bruno-kema! Thank you for submitting a story, and thank you for indicating which logline you are using. This story is successful on many fronts:…bellou61 in #hive-170798 • 4 days agoRE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No StrangersI like this story . The tension builds up well and the final memory and statement leads you to think. Will they meet again?. Well done!stormcharmer in #hive-170798 • 5 days agoRE: Just Another DayYou know that this really could be something out of life! How often do these happen when we are completely unaware? We only hear about the things that actually become massive…hivebuzz in # • 5 days agoRE: Happy Eid MubarakCongratulations @bruno-kema! You have completed the following achievement on the Hive blockchain and have been rewarded with new badge(s) : You made more than 600 comments.rexplanet in #originalcontent • 6 days agoRE: Happy Eid Mubarakyou too have a happy and great Eid.💖 Much Celebration to you alljayna in #hive-170798 • 7 days agoRE: Just Another DayI really enjoyed this story, @bruno-kema. It not only captures the enormous drama of a terrible accident in progress, but it shares such an intriguing insight — that these huge…theinkwell in #hive-170798 • 7 days agoRE: Just Another DayExcellent work, @bruno-kema. You set the stage for disaster very well, and give us a scenario, a character whose plight we care about, a frightening conflict and a great…mrnightmare.net in #hive-170798 • 7 days agoRE: Just Another DayIt's amazing how the incident didn't take someone else life. Even though distractions happen, we're still thankful that no life was wasted. Just an ordinary day that might happen.kemmyb in #fiction • 15 days agoRE: In Memoriam: The Inkwell Prompt #23Wow. This is beautifully written. You are a fantastic writer, @bruno-kema. The emotions of a family who dearly missed one of their own are vividly portrayed in this story. Nicely done. 🙂deeanndmathews in #hive-170798 • 16 days agoRE: In Memoriam: The Inkwell Prompt #23Oh, this was so moving ... a beautiful tribute ... the awkwardness, the grief, the determination to push through ... the honor, the respect, the continuation of love, and memories ... well done.ricardo993 in #hive-170798 • 16 days agoRE: In Memoriam: The Inkwell Prompt #23How tragic, but how nice that the memory of a person brings them back together. Sometimes it happens in families, they break up until they never see each other again.
