RE: The World We Know: The Inkwell Prompt #13/ Imagination Ticklers

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I didn't remember seeing the prompt for this until the end - and then I laughed with GREAT gusto as I realized what you had written.

Marvelous! The writing was superb!

Cats aside, I love the bravery of the mother. Willing to stand up for what she believed in, come what may. Excellent tale! Thank you



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Thank you very much @stormcharmer.
I didn't want to reveal the cat's bit till the very end. For maximum effect. That's also why i didn't put the prompt at the beginning of the story. Didn't want to let the 'cat' out of the bag😏
Thank you very much for reading, I'm glad you like the story.

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It was the right choice. I often like to do the same thing with my readers. Give them the big "punch" at the end. You did it exactly right. and "cat out of the bag" - I see what you did there. ha ha!
Please give a read to my "sitting on a gold mine" story, and see if it gives you a chuckle? :-)

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Thank you very much. And i really appreciate your kind words...
I'll check out your story asap😁

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