A Tale of Two Halves - @theinkwell Fantasy Short Story

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This story is my response to the first fiction prompt from The Ink Well hive community. The beginning was written by @stormlight24 and sets the scene for an interesting tale of fantasy, magic and mayhem.

I have put their writing in quotation so that you can differentiate between mine, and his work. I hope you enjoy reading...

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A Tale of Two Halves

Prompt by @stormlight24

Night fell as I rode into town, the same place where I was taken from so long ago. The calm summer evening awakened memories and emotions that I thought buried deep after the torments I had endured.

I headed straight for the Shining Knight inn, knowing it was the only one in town. After all this time away I felt like a stranger. I couldn’t bear to look down starling street as I rode by quickly, fighting those memories that threatened to break through. That street led to the slum where my house where it all happened. Was it still the same? Some other people probably inhabited it now.

I tied my horse to a tree at the entrance to the inn, and a gruff old man's voice startled me as I filled the horse’s nosebag.
"You’re, alive. I always knew you would come back, Erin ... "
Through the dim light of evening I saw the feeble old man on the porch of the inn leaning on a walking stick. He cried, his sobs shaking his whole body.

''You’ve returned at a terrible time Erin! You should go back from where you came, the city is full of enemy troops. The Milen Empire lost the city years ago.''

''Hey, you there, unbutton your belt and lower the sword to the ground.'' A sharp voice barked from behind him.

“No sudden moves or we’ll stick you full of holes like a pig on market day.”

Continuation by @raj808

I turned slowly arms out wide as the three Caldainians in full plate armor reigned in their warhorses which snorted plumes of hot breath into the cold autumn air.

The slant of these men's eyes indicated they meant business.

"What can I help you with friend," I lowered my arms slowly to undo the clasp of my sword belt.

The lead soldier dropped his spear to my throat in a flash, nicking a tiny spot of blood as it rested against my adam's apple.

"Slowly, friend" he sneered as I unbuckled the belt clasp and my scabbard plopped unceremoniously into the mud.

I felt sick. Gutwrencher the blade that had spilled so much Gretilin blood in defense of the sacred forest lying in the night's slurry. There was nothing to do. Too many of those bastards and that captain would skewer me if I made a move.

The old man looked on. His eyes were rimmed with tears but they held that strange faraway look I'd seen before on the battlefield. Eyes resigned to acts of atrocity.

"Who are you and what is your purpose here in Palamon. Speak quickly man."

I'm just a traveler passing through, I used to live here... in a different time."

Memories of her sweet face hit me like the smell of a summer meadow. Playing 'chase the rat' down these same shit stained streets, I was always the rat and she always caught me. Kissing in the cul de sac behind the bakers and sharing those first fumbled forays beneath each other's clothes. Hot breath, warm flesh, the smell of sweat and that throbbing need in the head.

"I asked you a question man."

The sharp voice shocked me out of my memories.

"What?" I stuttered, unaware of how long I had stood there frozen like a rabbit staring down a snake.

The spear point pressed harder against my throat, forcing me back on my heels.

"I can vouch for him," the old man piped up in a quavering voice. "He is my nephew, I can prove it if you'll just join me in the inn for a pint of ale... on me."

The captain eyed the old man uncertainly before barking a command at one of the troops.

"Hog tie him to the post next to his horse."

My horse looked on as they bound my hands and legs to the stable post. I carefully tested the bonds as they stared down the old man. Useless, if I pulled one way it wrenched my left arm out of its socket, and the other twisted my leg painfully. These assholes knew what they were about.

"Ok old man, lets drink and talk."

The captain sauntered toward the inn before glancing back at me.

Oh, and give our visitor a Caldainian handshake."

A fist flashed in the peripheral of my vision sparking flashes of fire through my temples. Laughter echoed through the blackness and faded into a starry night.

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Darkness, slime, the smell of piss and a niggling pain in my big toe coaxed me into consciousness. I opened an eye crusted with blood, the cracked eyelid shooting hot lances of pain through my forehead.

I twitched and the rat darted away into the darkness. 'Chase the rat', I laughed and then retched as my throat rebelled from the bite of the putrid air.

I looked around me. The dank cell was like any other, wet straw matted the floor and a small barred window winked grey in the gloom. My eyes rebelled at the dirty wash of light.

How long had I been out? It must have been a while.

I pushed myself up on my elbows. Every muscle screaming in protest as I staggered toward the window to get my barrings. My bare chest was a chess board of bruises, and the long welt of a flail seemed seared from collar bone to navel.

Fuck, they have really done a number on me. Sick bastards. Beating a man when he's out cold.

I stared out of the window into the cold light of dawn. The city of Palamon stretched out before me. The gilded houses of the merchants quarter marched down cobbled streets like soldiers, while on the other side of the river Ooesse the hovels of Scragrow, Beggarsrift and Cocklegrain street were a brown smear, fading into the distance. The river a battle line with an occasional bridge joining the opposing sides.

This place had always been a tale of two halves. A border town caught between two warring empires. It seemed the Caldainians had won while he had been away from the world.

I stared up at the sky. A thin rain began to fall, quickly building into a torrent. Cupping my hands I stretched out to catch the water - manna from the spirits. Thunder shook the town as black clouds descended, casting their shadows over Palamon like angry giants from ancient fables.

I drank and felt the energy building.

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The morning chatter of birds grew silent. A lone squirrel twitched its tail as clouds gathered over the forest.

Shieleth gazed up at the angry clatter of the canopy and leaned against a hoary oak placing one slender hand to her ear to listened to the dryads whispering.

Rain falls,
the hills proclaim
the name of Miraliam
and the goddesses blessed.
Erin Erin, the grass moans,
drink waters inflamed
with Alaman's bones.
The rain's squall
murmurs of gathering rage
and the sky god's fall.

Shieleth had heard enough. The elf gave a sharp whistle.

"Elinair where do you reside in the morning's mellow chorus?" She sprinted through the bracken, weaving through trees that leaned in to watch the elf's mad dash. She mounted an ancient path slick with moss, as sure footed and lithe as a forest panther.

Finally she crested the hill and scanned Greenfolk forest laid out below her. All the trees were still now, not a branch moved and she could hear the dryads weeping just at the edge of hearing.

She let out a loud whistle again and cried with the might of magic drawn from the roots of Greenfolk forest, "Elinair my steed, bare me in the name of Miraliam."

A piercing whinny echoed across the forest as all the leaves in the canopy shivered with the noise of that call.

"Come my friend," Shieleth sighed as she saw the white streak weaving between the trees below.

The unicorn leaped the twenty feet from the foot of the hill to land prancing in front of her and she stepped forward tentatively to stroke its muzzle. "We ride now to aid Erin the blessed guardian of Greenfolk forest."

Elinair dipped its head gently pressing it's horn into Shieleth's hand and with a divine strength swung her up to its back and reared once prancing its hoofs against the soft dew kissed grass of elfstone hill.

"On to the town of men," Shieleth whooped, blood boiling with the thought of battle.

The world around her blurred. The mottled russet of bark flashed by as the whistling wind blew through her hair. Bright green leaves smiled a thousand triumphs in a sudden sunburst from a break in the clouds.

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I drank of the water. The thunder building with each swallow and suddenly I knew what to do. The magic's pattern sinking into my mind as the thunder morphed into a heartbeat inside my chest.

Wounds healed, aches fled like a swallow in the first threads of summer's awakening. Power filled me as I continued to drink then spoke the words imparted to me by Alaman lord of the sky.

Roots run deep,
that no stone can keep
from finding the source
the course of all water.

I let the water trickle from my hands down the wall of the keep.

All was shining now in the rapture of the magic's mania. The lord of the sky appeared in one of the clouds smiling down at me as the rain battered my upturned face, washing me clean of the cell's filth. A second incantation came to me then, rising in me as if from my stomach.

Roots follow paths
along crannies and cracks
causing stone's decay
and foundations to fray
until at last man's
blight on the land
is blown away.

The trees at the base of the keep swayed in time with the rhythm of my incantation as I felt the trees meld with me fully. My arms were as wood, solid yet mutable, strong yet flexible.

"Hey, what are you doing scum."

A guard fumbled with the keys to open the cell door, "Shut the hell up... You woke me from my afternoon nap shit for brains. I'm going to flay you alive when I get in there."

I felt my roots flex and watched as they stretched woody fingers from the soil and up the wall of the keep, weaving in and out of cracks, raining mortar with each probe into the stonework.

"What are you doing at the window?" The guard burst into the cell and gawped at this swaying half naked prisoner, who turned to look at him with shining eyes. He swung a club at the base of my neck. It had the same effect as it would have hitting a tree. The club ricocheted back and cracked the guard on the forehead.

He reached for his sword.

I felt the power surge in me and looked back out the window. The roots pulsed through the stone work and I looked to Alaman who was now joined by my blessed mistress Miraliam, goddess of the forests and all things wild. They both nodded.

The guard thrust the sword at my belly. I flexed my muscles and the wall exploded inwards flinging masonry into the cell with a boom that echoed the rolling thunder. I stood immutable like an ancient sycamore, stalwart, calm and unmovable. The guard's sword bending against the teak of my midsection. A huge stone bounced off my chest and bounced into the guard ripping his head from his shoulders. A fountain of blood cascaded from his torso, spinal column writhing back and forth like a decapitated snake. He dropped to the floor.

"Erin," a melodic voice called as I emerged from my trance. I walked to the gaping fissure where the wall of the keep had been. The god and goddesses' faces faded in the cloud as lightening struck the merchant's church of the seven divines setting it aflame in a plume of fire.

Below was the most beautiful woman I have ever known. My soulmate, my Shieleth.

She sat astride the unicorn Elinair. I knew then that the goddess truly had plans this day. Elinair only came from the deeps of the woods in the direst need, and I had only met the mare once before when the Gretilins of Mermerln swamp had amassed to burn the sacred forest of Greenfolk.

"Jump my love."

I walked to the edge and looked down. A final flash of lightening struck the roof of the keep above and I saw the last fading visage of my goddess smiling down at me.

I jumped. The air was soft like a pillow, as a strong wind lifted me outward and down and masonry cascaded all around. I landed softly behind Shieleth and embraced her tightly as the unicorn raced quicksilver through the streets of Palamon.

Shieleth's sword flashed in the mad dash ripping guts open, slashing eyes to blindness. The unicorn weaved and dodged spears with unearthly speed, Shieleth dealing death to any who tried to bar our way.

Suddenly we halted.

An old man sat on the porch of the Shining Knight inn. His eyes were blackened and lip split with a welt across the left side of his face. He stared slack jawed at this vision of legend calmly prancing before him.

"Erin," he stuttered.

"Is that truly you my boy."

I stared at him, this man who seemed familiar, yet completely foreign. Suddenly something surfaced from the deep inky well of memory.

A dark room. My father weeping at a bedside and a swaddled woman, her ivory white face seeming to shine in the gloom of the room. A man's face appeared in my vision, a younger version of this man before me now. He was holding a spinning top urging me to go out into the street to play.

"He is your kin Erin," Shieleth assured me softly touching my arm gently.

A clatter of armor could be heard in the distance and the elf stared with her keen eyes.

"Soldiers approach."

I didn't know what to make of any of this. So long in the forest, so long without any memories other than that of my first love and my father beating me.

"The forest makes you forget Erin. It is the price of the goddesses blessing. Quick, we must be away."

I stared down at this old man, beaten and whipped. Treated like dirt and left to sit in the gutter.

I held out my hand.

"Come uncle. We will go on a journey to a place where there is no pain and the waters of Miraliam heal all sorrow."

He stared up at me.

"A place the Caldainians can't come?" He asked pleadingly.

I laughed as he took my hand and I swung him up behind me.

"We go to Greenfolk forest to visit the elves uncle. A place where dryads dance and the trees protect all who respect Miraliam the earth mother and Alaman the father of the sky. No, the Caldainians can't find you there."

The old man smiled and sighed.

I shed a tear at the sound of that sigh. It echoed all the world's sorrows, finally cast away in a single breath.

The end.

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I contemplated setting this fantasy story in the world I have created for the fantasy novel I'm working on, but eventually decided against it as I wanted to explore a more traditional fantasy setting with elves, druids, gods and goddesses. If you are interested in reading my other fantasy work please check out the links below.
Forbidden Fruit
The Duties of a Court Wizard
The Gelded One
Divine Intervention
The Madness of the Gods
The Laughter of a God
The Diary of a Wizard
A Nest of Vipers


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Ooooh the tree scene!!! You must have read the latest science studies on how trees actually do communicate with each other through their root system, but if you didn't, you already knew it intuitively. You show it happening in ways only fiction can, making it more real than science can. Erin drinks of the water and lets his mind reach out.... a rhythm builds... The trees at the base of the keep swayed in time with the rhythm of my incantation as I felt the trees meld with me fully. My arms were as wood, solid yet mutable, strong yet flexible. and I stood immutable like an ancient sycamore, stalwart, calm and unmovable. The guard's sword bending against the teak of my midsection.
The magic!
SPOILER ALERT if anyone reads comments before posts:
This part is goosebumpy awesome:
Elinair only came from the deeps of the woods in the direst need, and I had only met the mare once before when the Gretilins of Mermerln swamp had amassed to burn the sacred forest of Greenfolk.
"Jump my love."
And the forest welcoming Erin, uncle, and soulmate... I want to go there!
This is why I devoured fantasy in my childhood. I knew where I wanted to go, and stories like yours took me there.
Bravo!

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If any editor or critic ever accuses you of "purple prose," take it as a compliment. This!

The world around her blurred. The mottled russet of bark flashed by as the whistling wind blew through her hair. Bright green leaves smiled a thousand triumphs in a sudden sunburst from a break in the clouds.

While it's true that some prose may be overly purple in the hands of novice writers, this is sublime.

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Thanks, I instinctually felt that it felt right and also good writing. Mainly because I'm trying to describe the world from the perspective of a wood elf who lives directly connected to nature in a fundamental and magical level.

The leaves really do dance and smile for the sun in an elf's perception... and if I'm honest, for me too on one of my more mentally effusive days 🙂 😂😆

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You're my saviour with these comments Carol.

I thought it was going to be another long story with many hours in the writing, and editing, where the only comments I got was a two word spammy 'good post' and an automated message from our lovely resident 'definetly not fun' demental Christian spam attack team.

You must have read the latest science studies on how trees actually do communicate with each other through their root system.

I'd read something about that on the internet but it wasn't in my mind as I wrote, well maybe subconsciously.

And the forest welcoming Erin, uncle, and soulmate... I want to go there!

Me too. And as I was coming to the end of the story I felt a powerful compulsion for Erin to save his uncle, for him to bring him into his druidic world where sorrows evaporate like melting dew in the morning. Tolkien is the master at creating this feeling of timeless joy through the magic of elven realms, lothlorien being the one that springs to mind. I always loved those sections of his books where they're lifted out of danger and seemingly time, to these divine places of magic.

This is why I devoured fantasy in my childhood. I knew where I wanted to go, and stories like yours took me there.
Bravo!

Thank you for that lovely compliment. To be included in the annals of fantasists that sparked that great escapism is high praise indeed.

I also devoured fantasy novels as a kid and my claim to fantasy fame is that I've read lord of the rings over 10 times, crazy I know. I also loved Ursula le guine earthsea, Terry brooks shanara books, anything by various authors in the dnd forgotten realms settings - but particularly - RA Salvatore and his drittz dourden books.

Escapism through fantasy fiction was a big part of my childhood as a died in the wool introvert. I still love reading fantasy and an currently on a book of shirt stories by Joe Abercrombie.

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Your response to my reply is itself worthy of a whole new post, Raj, with a brief memoir on an introvert's childhood being peopled with fictional characters, and a list of your favorite books, and why you love the fantasy genre. Now I need to read everything on your list!

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ha ha, I just re-read my comment to see if I could actually make a post out of it - which I might still - and I saw this typo 'and my cousin to game is that I've read lord of the rings over 10 times' 😆😆

That's what you get for writing comments on your phone at 3am in the morning. It's corrected now to read:

I also devoured fantasy novels as a kid and my claim to fantasy fame is that I've read lord of the rings over 10 times, crazy I know.

As to long and meaningful comments, you were my teacher! You always write real comments from the heart that actually respond to the content creators work. It is a sign of passion for writing that is not in everyone's make up. Definitely an editors trait.

Glad to have you here at The Ink Well carol!

P.s. check your twitter. I sent you a message about an opportunity that's available at The Ink Well. Nothing serious, just something that you might wanna look at and consider :)

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@raj808, There are many people and cultures who believe upon Magical Forests and Speaking Trees, who knows nature holds so many secrets. Stay blessed.

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There are many people and cultures who believe upon Magical Forests and Speaking Trees

Yes, there are so many legends and mythology around this archtype of nature coming alive. In England there is the legend of the green man, a kind of personification of the woods and nature.

I feel very connected to the mystery of nature and that came out in this story :)

Glad it resonated with you :)

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Diversification Of Myths or may be Truths. Keep writing wonderful pieces brother. Stay blessed.

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Oh this is a wonderful story. I just love it. The incantations, the old man saved after risking his life for someone who did not remember him at all, the magic! Excellent.

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Thank you so much @owasco.

I've been waiting and looking out for your poem in response to last week's prompt. I know what it is like when the inspiration doesn't flow so I'm not trying to put pressure on you.

I was just looking forward to reading it.

This story really awakened my love of writing fantasy fiction! It flowed easily and the magic, and mystacism just kinda developed organically. not usual for me as I usually plan a lot with fiction.

Thanks for reading :) Glad you enjoyed it

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Oh the inspiration is flowing! I've been working hard on it! I haven't worked on anything else for the past five days!!! I could tinker with it forever, so I've decided to deem it done and I'm now finishing up the post. I hope to post it tomorrow. I spent some time trying to figure out how to record myself reading it, but after several unproductive hours of that I finally gave up. Maybe I will do a second post of my reading it. We'll see. I do need to step up my game on that end of things. How do you do it?

That's amazing that your story just flowed out! It's really good! Very beautiful, those incantations are fabulous! I really loved those.

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Looking forward to reading it!

I spent some time trying to figure out how to record myself reading it, but after several unproductive hours of that I finally gave up. Maybe I will do a second post of my reading it. We'll see. I do need to step up my game on that end of things. How do you do it?

I'll break it down step by step.

  1. I use an app on my phone in a quiet place to read the poem out and record it. I've got an android phone and the app is simply called 'voice recorder' find it on play store (or an apple equivalent).

  2. After recording I copy it from my phone on to the desktop of my computer and then upload it to Soundcloud (https://soundcloud.com/), then share the soundcloud link you can find in the share section under the embed section. If you put that in a post on steem it will look like the one I've shared below :) P.s. you may have to sign up for a soundcloud account but you can do it easily with a google email/account and the basic package gives you more than enough space to upload hundreds of poems.

The really complicated ones I make with music in the background require extra steps, suing sound engineering software that I'd have to make a full on tutorial post to explain or I'd be here typing all night ;-) and you'd probably get lost with what I was saying.

But I have just checked and the two step method I outlined above definitely works! I just uploaded an mp3 file from my voice recorder software to soundcloud to double check and it uploaded to fine. as long as you record it as a wav file or mp3 it will work :)

Here's an old one of mine I'm not sure you will have heard called 'A song to the sentient earth.'

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Thank you so much! I have an android phone too. Will definitely try this out.
Nice poem. Now back to slaving away at my ballad!

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I really love those incantations! Calling the growth to follow the water he trickled down the outside wall, the prison crumbling, his floating out to the unicorn and his true love on pillows of magical air. I adore this story.

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awww thanks again. It is honestly comments like this and the thought that their are people who genuinely like my stories here that keeps me writing on steem!

I loved that scene with the roots as well. Again, it just came to me unplanned as I was writing, and I was thinking how does he escape. it wasn't really until that point that I decided he was going to unleash some serious wrath of the god's natural forces.

I liked the way it turned out and my only self criticism is that I would have liked to spend an hour or two more filling the story out with some really gruesome battle scenes as they escaped the city.

Unfortunately, when I was writing it I didn't have an extra hour to spare to get it perfect :(

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My question is why did he not work some of his magic instead of dropping his weapon? Does he get his weapon back? Maybe the old man could have rescued it somehow, and that's how he got all beat up.

I answered my first question by thinking that his love had to activate her magic for him to be able to activate his. Working together they could not be stopped, but he alone is powerless. something like that.

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ha ha, this is where an hour or a few more and I would have been able to make this story perfect... and then I would have struggled with whether to put it up on steem at all, or try submitting it to Ares Magazine or one of the other Sci-Fi and fantasy paying magazines.

In my mind I knew/know the back history, but I needed to flesh it out through action or internal narrative/memories for it to really be apparent to the reader.

He was a warrior, turned druid. In a lot of fantasy I've read druids can't use metal weapons, only staffs of wooden clubs. Also they can't just summon magic at will like a wizard with spell casting, it is more a communing with nature... hens the drinking of rain from the twin gods of Miraliam goddess of the earth and Alaman lord of the sky. And the spontaneous reciting of the incantation, like he was channeling it rather than it was a spell he'd memorized.

Roots run deep,
that no stone can keep
from finding the source
the course of all water.

Roots follow paths
along crannies and cracks
causing stone's decay
and foundations to fray
until at last man's
blight on the land
is blown away.

There are ancient stories and mythology around druids in this real world of ours - I often wonder how close we stray between reality and the paths of imagination - of ritual magical acts of communion with earth or sky. That was kinda what i was going for.

The relationship between Shieleth and Erin was meant to sort of mirror the relationship of the gods, and I wanted to show that elemental magical connection with nature that elves have in the best fantasy settings. Almost like they are part of the fabric of magic rather than outside of it. This is why I wrote it like she is whispered to by the forest, coaxed by the dryads of the goddess and the unicorn to save her lover.

It's an odd balance to get it right, it creates a kind of unreality and seems too good to be true that she is just told where he is and how/where to save him. To be honest, Shieleth could have benefited from a lot more character development.

My question is why did he not work some of his magic instead of dropping his weapon? Does he get his weapon back? Maybe the old man could have rescued it somehow, and that's how he got all beat up.

This is so interesting for inspiring me to write a sequel, as the old man could indeed present his weapon to him and maybe they have an adventure together after his uncle heals and grows strong in the magical woods of the Greenfolk.

thinking that his love had to activate her magic for him to be able to activate his. Working together they could not be stopped, but he alone is powerless. something like that.

It is not as I intended it consciously, but now I think about it the whole thing is symbiotic. The sky god and mother earth, neither turns the wheels of the world without the other. And Shieleth and Erin, perhaps they can only perform these miracles of the nature gods together!

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Oh man, what a story. Best short story I've read lately. I really like that you have introduced all the elements of fiction that are necessary through your storytelling. You gave names to everything and everybody, wrote poems. Fantastic from start to finish. The talent you possess is fascinating.

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Thanks dude, I appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed this tale of mystery and magic 🙂

You gave names to everything and everybody, wrote poems. Fantastic from start to finish.

I am in the middle of writing a fantasy novel, and hope to get it finished sooner rather than later. Perhaps one day I'll be able to announce its publication and availability in shops on steem 😂🙂

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Great Short Story it really got me !CTP

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Thanks @whywhy

That's the greatest compliment I can get as a fiction writer, if the flow of the story just carries someone away into another world.

Ha ha, I know my job is done well when that happens 🙂👍

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Who knew how trees communicated? I didn't. A very inventive way you came up with for them to "talk". Thanks for sharing.

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Yeah, I was very cognisant of trying to describe how trees might communicate in this story.
Using imagination to describe a possible way it might happen.

cheers

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