RE: Almost Finished One Battle... An "I Thought It Would Be Zombies..." Preview
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Her eyes seem a bit detached. Is there backstory for that?
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Her eyes seem a bit detached. Is there backstory for that?
Hmm... detached as in emotionally distant or detached as in physically not quite right on her head?
Almost as if she’s breaking the fourth wall and connecting with the reader, rather than fighting for her life. But if the back story is that she’s very powerful, maybe she could seem to be casually dealing with the minor annoyance of a pack of goblins.
Aha! Gotcha. I can kinda see the 4th wall break but that’s not intended. The read that this situation is a mere nuisance for her is spot on though! She also has a certain distaste for some of these fellow magical creatures as she feels their uncivilized behavior reflects poorly on her!