The Reckless Pilot - An Original Short Story

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This first photo is my entry for the Photochain Challenge hosted by @davidesimoncini but this is actually the last shot in this story...

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This is my first time participating in this contest, as I've only discovered it this week. This week's keywords are Landscape and Bird and my extra keyword is Tombstones.


The Reckless Pilot


The sun was shining on a quiet afternoon at the Saint Andrew's Cemetery (Ondrejský Cintorín) in the center of Bratislava. But suddenly, a big commotion started and almost degenerated into a war.

The culprit? This crow who landed so near his colleague that he nearly banged his head wide open. 😁

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Such a big lack of respect wasn't going to be ignored by the chieftain of the group. He couldn't allow others to see him as a weakling, so he started shouting at the lousy pilot who had just endangered his life.

The guy, however, was too distracted with the piece of straw he had been carrying around all day... and he didn't care at all. 🙄

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So, the leader kept shouting. The others gathered around to see how this was going to end. Now, everyone was looking at the action. 😬

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Since the chieftain was still being ignored by the reckless pilot, he approached him in a clearly menacing way. Then he called his bodyguard to teach the culprit a lesson. 🤯

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The other guy was playing dumb but he wasn't stupid.

Feeling like the others weren't just let this episode went by, he quickly took an evasive action and flew away before the group's bodyguard could draw any blood.

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The bad pilot quickly disappeared into the skies and went to cause chaos and confusion elsewhere.

And so the quietness returned to the park... and all was silent again. 🤗

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I hope you enjoyed this little story, which is totally made up, of course. Who knows if I am even close to the truth? 🤭


CameraPanasonic Lumix DC-TZ90
LocationBratislava - Slovakia
Photos6 (Edited with GIMP)


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Yep crows are very voracious ... Last Friday, I saw the office the killing of a pigeon by two huge crows ... Impressive. I'll have to find a way to post the video of the feast that followed.

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Crows can be mean..... persistent and makes a lot of noise! But my cat loves to sit in the window and watch! Great photos though :)

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Looks like a good subject and story here my friend and the silence of the cemetery forms a nice contrast to the noise of the crows.
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I hope he is not coming here we have no need for chaos :D

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Crazy pilot! He should get a ticket and be fined!! With suspending license!

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Did you randomnly went into a cemetery just to take pictures or, you were just passing by, or, you attended a funeral? its good there's no ghost in your shots! hahahahahaha

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Nah, I was in a nearby public garden and saw this cemetery marked as a place to see, in Bratislava, so I paid it a little visit.

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lol I thought story about people then after reading it. It's all about those crows who almost banging. Really there was a bodyguard, haha it's fun to read tho.

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Very nice! The photos fit the story perfectly ^_^

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Nice story. And 99% of the time, it's about some petty squabble that could probably be resolved by talking it through and apologizing for any recklessness on his part. He should have realized that crashing a party would have consequences. Evidently, he wasn't taught or forgot his etiquette.

Then again, it could have been that the pilot was on a honey-do mission and deadline for a task his mate probably sent him out to the store to pick up an item (straw) to finish their home in time. He wasn't in the mood for polite conversation.

Just my two cents in defense of the reckless pilot, poor guy.

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