The perfect Umbrella

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The short road lead to the community of Ekpoma land, the land of truth and abundance, Mfon, a young man who does not like doing a thing, he always looking up to good things of life but he dislike work.

Ekpoma land was having a yam festival that they normally celebrated every first month of the year, at this festival, a lot of activities would be carried out, people will dance, masquerade will be lead out, man of camel would be out, and son.
all the community members would brought out their yam in one accord and it will be shared among the members of the community, this is done to promote Unity and love, Mfon, as he was passing through, hear a sound, not an ordinary sound but such that remembled an ongoing festival, he stood still, listened to it again and make a step towards it, leading him to where the sound is coming from.

When he got there, Idorenyin his friend were dancing with others of his friends, Mfon was amazed to see love celebrated in the land of Ekpoma, he said, I wish my people could organize a celebration like this, in my community!

Common! Boy. Join us." Idorenyin called out to Mfon.
"Thank you my good friend." Said Mfon.
"You're welcome my bossom friend." Replied Idorenyin. He joined in dancing and after everything, food was served, Idorenyin gave his shared of yam to Mfon to return home with it, Mfon was very happy, he said, thank you, my good friend Idorenyin, he replied, you are welcome my bossom friend.

When, he arrived home, his mother, asked him, who gave you, six tuber's of yam, he replied the perfect umbrella blessed me with it, and cover my body from heavily rainfall.

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Good story.
The story telling is interesting. Story about a community that celebrates a big yam festival where people in the community shared their yam with others. I loved the fact they showed good hospitality to Mfon. Although, you story dialogue wasn't written well

Common! Boy, join us, Idorenyin called Mfon, he joined in dancing and after everything, food was served, Idorenyin gave his shared of yam to Mfon to return home with it, Mfon was very happy, he said, thank you, my good friend Idorenyin, he replied, you are welcome my bossom friend.

When, he arrived home, his mother, asked him, who gave you, six tuber's of yam, he replied the perfect umbrella blessed me with it, and cover my body from heavily rainfall.

"Common! Boy. Join us." Idorenyin called out to Mfon

"Thank you my good friend." Said Mfon

"You're welcome my bossom friend." Replied Idorenyin.

These are just little mistakes, which can be corrected without changing your story.

I enjoyed reading your post. Keep writing bro 💯😌

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This story of friendship and benevolence is also an introduction to culture. The yam festival is an interesting piece of information about a community custom. Thank you for sharing this pleasant story with the Ink Well community.

Have you read and commented on the work of at least two other writers this week? (See The Ink Well community rules on our home page.) This helps our community thrive, and also makes you eligible to be chosen for a spotlight in our weekly highlights magazine. Thank you!

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Yeah, I have done that already.
I have read and commented on this two good story:>>

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