Cucumber

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Strong in disguise
Though fresh it looks

Green, the nature it has
Wonders, so juicy it is

pleasure, satisfaction it might give
So green staring right at me

Guessing the perfect match
Match to sweeten the moment

Moment of erotic pleasure
Feelings I didn't intend

But help I couldn't render
Rolling over my softened floor

Green cucumber 🥒 stucked in my hand
Making it's way through my triangle

Thought of pleasure all I get
But feelings not the real

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Please do not abuse the teamuk tag. It is for people from the UK.

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So sorry, I thought it was made open to show love for UK. It won't happen again.

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Please check the purpose of tags before using them. Do not just copy what others do.

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This is a daring poem! Your use of inverted sentence structures creates a sense of distance, as in "green, the nature it has/ wonders, so juicy it is" Thanks for sharing it

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Aww..erotic poetry...interesting approach! Congrats on that! Also, the name of the poem along with the intro are adding a fun glimpse - so, the pleasure is double..😅

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Very heartfelt and nice your writing, I really like that you talk about fruits like cucumber, it is a great and different way to read, a hug =)

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Thanks for always giving a great feedback. I really appreciate

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