FROZEN HOPES

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I could hardly get my eyes off her the moment I and David arrived at the frozen pond. It had been freezing and the heater in David's car was no good, I'd been over it with him so many times, "You really need to change your goddamn heaters, they're of no use!", I yell at him and each time it always fell on deaf ears.

Almost frozen to death, I couldn't wait to exercise a little, my skating shoes were already by my side waiting for me to swing into action. What is she doing, I wondered because she'd been standing at the far corner for a while now staring at her skating shoes. I guess she must be a learner or something I thought to myself. I must admit that she was really beautiful with well rounded breasts and a nice curve.

I couldn't kill the urge to work up to her so I immediately got on my skating shoes and skated all the way to where she stood, I could see the half smile that drew across her face when I reached her.

Hey, do you mind skating with me?

I asked.

I don't mind, at all, I do not know how to fix the shoes, can you help me?

She said revealing perfectly decayed teeth with an odour that could kill a new born baby.

I don't know how it happened but I woke up in David's car sweating profusely, he smiled at me as he was driving and I immediately knew what went down, I gave a sigh of disappointment and frozen hopes.

This short story is a five-minute freewrite inspired by the monday prompt "frozen pond". Join the @freewriters community to receive daily prompts, hosted by @mariannewest.

Thank you for reading 😊❤️

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Hi there, very interesting your story, sometimes it happens in real life.

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I'm glad you see it that way, sure sometimes everything doesn't always go as planned thanks for reading.

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She said revealing perfectly decayed teeth with an odour that could kill a new born baby.

😳😂 Omg! You had created such suspense and excitement I was captivated and looking forward to a nice ending only to read this paragraph! Hahaha!

You do know how to spin a tale. David had better fix the heater in his car so you can stop having funny dreams! 😄

Ps: You have to drop your story link on Ms Marianne's prompt post. 🙂

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😳😂 Omg! You had created such suspense and excitement I was captivated and looking forward to a nice ending only to read this paragraph! Hahaha!

Lol, it was going so good in my head then, boom, a certain thought came and I had to go with it, took just a split second 😂😂😂

You do know how to spin a tale. David had better fix the heater in his car so you can stop having funny dreams! 😄

I hope he does that sooner o, because it's really been tiring, haha.

I'll do that...thanks for the warm comment dear. ❤️

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😂😂 well we all know the reason for that dream. David had better fix the damn heater!

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😂😂😂, I'm sure he'll just smile at me again and act like he doesn't know what needs to be done. That guy!

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I don't encourage violence but maybe hit him on the head for factory reset😁😁

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lol that must have been some bad breath to knock her out for the count 🤣

!PIZZA !ALIVE

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😂😂😂 yeah it must have been really really bad .

Thanks for reading through and dropping a Comment

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