A Fifty Step Wednesday Walk In Verse

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oblique light.
with shorter days comes
longer sight


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Maybe it's the sun hitting me full on the face
that has me pondering the ineffable
or the unsaid
and looking for answers
at my feet


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It doesn't suck
to not know the name
of a color


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Oh let me drink my fill of this!
this weird hanging on of the leaves
massages my eyes
and I forget
for a moment
about my aching knee


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Surprise!
That odd splotch in the last photo
is a cat
about to transport up


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Who is it that once said
No post is complete without a picture of a cat?


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It may be in nearly every front yard in America
a plant that most of us pass by without thought
but it does have its moments


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Hydrangea -
lime light in summer
vine ripe in fall


I still can't walk far without consequences, but I can hobble out a ways from my front door - perfect fodder for a #wednesdaywalk post hosted by @tattoodj. If you haven't had the pleasure, please check it out here

I've always thought #wednesdaywalk was a challenge of many personal gifts and this is what it gave me this week, wonder at the littlest things a short hobble from my front door, and an irresistable urge to write poetry.

Thank you for coming along.

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All the poems above are completely spontaneous freewrites. The haiku (in the 3/5/3 style of mizu no oto by @bananfish) is the best of the bunch. It's a fantastic haiku, eh @marcoricardi? I'd spent hours on the images for this post, and that haiku just popped out as you suggested it might! What a rush!

This is also my entry for @mariannewest's daily freewrite challenge here even though it has nothing whatsoever to do with the prompt "night shift". I just think those folks might like my post, and they are a forgiving bunch.


All images are my own unless otherwise stated.


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Thanks for joining Wednesday Walk :)

Sorry for short comment this week busy spending time with Grandkids :)

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I loved it! It reminded me of Robert Frost. He also had a good eye for nature love his works and yours too!

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Well it sure does not suck to get a compliment like that! Thank you!
How did the birthday family fare?

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Loved all the photos, the textures and colors were fascinating. And such a pretty cat! Also liked your poem captions. :)) Nice job!

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Thank you! I'm running through the other entries now, and just realized I am not reading the text, so others are probably not reading mine! So thank you for slowing down enough to read my little musings. Wednesdaywalks need to be enjoyed slowly, both by the writer and the readers.

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@owasco I hope that now in your night shift and your knee does not bother you anymore. Otherwise very good photography where the cat is among the leaves.

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Loved it!! Especially the cat :)

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Thank you! I just realized I forgot to do my encouragement this week (Tuesday). Sorry!!!

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this is wonderful, the pictures really suit the words, such a wonderful combination and what a great walk.
Curated for CreativeCoin x

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Thank you! It's always a pleasure when you drop by!

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I truly enjoyed the walk with you, a poetic autumnal stroll. I can smell the fresh air and feel the cold wind on my nose 🍂 Happy Thanksgiving!

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What a welcome comment! thank you!

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I like a good poem, leaves, and with a cat too, well, wonderful..

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Thank you! It's always nice to have a fellow poet stop by.

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Love it, especially the cat photo. A refreshing Wednesday Walk and lovely poems too.

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Love the cat photo! They get themselves in some funny places don't they?

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Howdy owasco! Wonderful writing and photos too, the cat even got in them! Well done.

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