24 HORAS | Poesía Original | Por @nachomolina | (ESP)

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24 horas me ha costado, sin descanso!

Sin pensar en los años, en la gente que pasó y vino, en lo que no creí
y pregunté a un adivino!

Yo, nunca he estado dormido, yo no sueño, ¡Vivo!
No vivo, de un sueño. Procedo acierto en el centro,
Por años tengo insomnio constante, pero lo tomo como un juego
En mi habitación hay duendes de turno, nocturno,
abren hoyos en escollos de mi cuello, como a un camello

Nunca saldré de este agujero, escribo sobre papiros,
sustantivos biográficos, lo más exacto que puedo,
sin rodeos, sin decir: ¡Son las nueve mañana los veo!
Porque yo no me canso, mis versos no son pesados,
los llevo siempre en un saco blando, como plumas de ganso.

Algo, tengo que llevarme en mi cápsula del tiempo
a veces no se que hacer, cuando una hoja de papel
me guiña el ojo desde mi almacén de recuerdos
ella dice, sácame a la luz porque en 24 horas alguien me estará leyendo

Anoche daba vueltas en el barrio,
vi a un asesino merodeando y algunos espantos
Al vecino, procreando en el jardín del patio
y su mujer, procreando en el jardín, ...de otro patio.
Aunque suene raro, aun tengo la llave de su cuarto

Oh, dios mío! debo salirme de aquí
en la próxima línea de mi texto, termino encarcelado junto a Britney Spear
Como lo dijo Jim, mientras besaba la serpiente en el desierto,
¡Soy el rey lagarto! No creo que drogas y alcohol ocasione infarto
y no vivió para cantarlo...

24 horas me ha costado,

Algún día seremos polvo, porque dicen que en el pasado
también fuimos de barro,
Ahora, lo puedo decir cantado o tal vez solo rimado
seguiré aquí esperando, se junten día y noche
porque, 24 horas me ha costado!



GRACIAS!

@nachomolina



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Amigo @nachomolina
Creo que sería bueno entregar esa llave de la vecina jajaja

Interesante texto.
Muy bueno, lleno de imágenes por doquier.
Me ha gustado, creo que logre caminar en las calles de ese barrio, que puede ser el mío, el de muchos.

Ciertamente,algún día seremos polvo, mientras esa no sea la realidad nuestra, toca seguir viviendo, y dejándose llevar por el llamado de las hojas.

Feliz fin de semana amigo.

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@josevas217
Gracias hermano!
Haciendo rimas sin descanso,
paseando por distintos géneros
literarios... El escritor debe tener
buen rendimiento en todos los
escenarios!
Hasta pronto!

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Spanish translation provided by @VictoriaBSB
24 hours has cost me, without rest!
Without thinking of the years, the people who came and went, in what I didn't believe and asked a fortune teller!

I have never been asleep, I do not dream, I live!
I don't live from a dream. I proceed right in the center,
For years I have constant insomnia, but I take it as a game
In my room there are shift night elves,
They open holes in the pitfalls of my neck, like a camel

I will never get out of this hole, I write on papyri,
biographical nouns, as accurate as I can,
bluntly, without saying: It's nine o'clock, i will see you tomorrow!
Because I don't get tired, my verses are not heavy,
I always carry them in a soft sack, like goose feathers.

Something, I have to take in my time capsule
Sometimes I don't know what to do when a sheet of paper
winks an eye at me, from my memory store
she says, bring me to light because in 24 hours someone will be reading me

Last night I was going around in the neighborhood,
I saw a killer hanging around and some ghosts
the neighbor, procreating in his backyard
and his wife, procreating another's backyard.
Although it sounds weird, I still have the key to her (his? i dont know who he is talking about in thise sentence - Victoria) room

Oh my God! I must get out of here
In the next line of my text, I end up imprisoned with Britney Spear
As Jim said, while kissing the snake in the desert,
I am the lizard king! I don't believe that drugs and alcohol cause heart attack
and he did not live to sing it ...

24 hours has cost me,
Someday we will be dust, because they say that in the past
we also were mud
Now, I can say it singing or maybe just rhymed
I'll keep waiting here, that day and night come together because, 24 hours has cost me!

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Because I don't get tired, my verses are not heavy,
I always carry them in a soft sack, like goose feathers.

I love this so much!! And Jim Morrison's entry too - surely? Thanks for the translation @victoriaBSB via @sunravelme - this poem is pure delight!!!

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Thanks @riverflows,
you're very kind :)

"As Jim said, while kissing the snake in the desert,
I am the lizard king! I don't believe that drugs and alcohol cause heart attack..."

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I believe that I will publish this writing below, in English, using the translation you have given me. Of course, duly identifying the user @VictoriaBSB as the person who made the translation. Do you agree? , for me it would be a true honor...

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Please, I would appreciate if you can give me your opinion about my latest publication link, which I would also like to have translated, if possible within the possibilities, thanks in advance.

Additionally, I ask you please, you can send me the link to subscribe to the DIscord channel. Because the one who sent me in the previous comment, I don't know why I miss a reason I couldn't access.

Atte.
@nachomolina

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