The Very First Time (Fifty Word Contest)

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The very first time


"This will feel a little cold," says the doctor while rubbing gel over her belly, "is your hearing aid on?"

Yes, she nods anxiously.

The ultrasound probe scans her abdomen, blurry images appear on the screen and she suddenly hears it for the very first time.

Her baby's heart beating.



Image through: commons.wikimedia.org - by Nevit Dilmen - under license: BY SA 3.0

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That's my new (and last minute) entry for @sarah-xx's Fifty Word Story contest on Whaleshares. The new prompt is the word "Beat".
For details click on the image below.

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Thank you so much for your time!

Until my next post,
Steem on and keep smiling, people!


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Original content by @ruth-girl - 2019 - All rights reserved
Also shared on my Whaleshares blog



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I thought you were pregnant for a second! Haha

Wish you and @trumpman a great summer!

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Hahaha! No, not yet at least :P

Thanks Lord! You too! Have fun, get a tan and stay hydrated ;)

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This is a very special and moving moment :) Good luck with the contest!

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Thank you! I bet you felt amazing when you heard it, didn't you?

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I was about to congratulate you... thought you're pregnant till I saw the image credit 😃😃

Nice one Ruthie. Have a blessed day

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