The unfinished nightmare

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A dream-dead peacock,
the monsoon imprint in her stabile eyes

The glacier wind trembles,
blends with Medusa's venomous curl

An unbeknown sign tempts the ocean-storm,
and when the night reigns..

Silent words get burnt in the wings of fireflies,
the insane poet jumps into the pensive red fire

The wait for torrent in the parched canion, but the catastrophe does not come

[Inspired by an untitled bengali poem from "Surjyo-pora chhaai" by Joy Goswami ; Volume 3, Pg.180]

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hi. I didn't know quite what to think about your poem. I'm just not connecting the peacock with the rest of the event happening in the poem. Maybe it's me. Just my opinion.

Have a great day, and take care.

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