Something About Your Eyes

in poetry •  5 months ago 

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Your eyes are like the hills

It got me looking high

Show me your secrets

Let me unravel you

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Your eyes are like the oceans

It got me surfing on your waves

Take me into your deep

Till I can finally breathe

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Your eyes are like the stars

Through you I could see the universe

Reveal your hidden mystery

Let your evolving aura linger on me

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Your eyes are like fire

It stirs up my burning desire

Purify me in your flames

Saint me with your love

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Your eyes are like the wind

Blow me away with your precious petals

Pollinate my existence with your touch

Let me blossom in your fragrance

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For the first time in a long while I decided to pen down a poem on paper. I usually type so much I've almost forgotten how it feels to write. It sounds weird but it is what it is. I ended up writing in verses which is not my usual style. I kinda like how this came out. Hope you guys love this.

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Different similes for different stanzas it's totally amazing, I love the comparisons, the metaphor are top knotch and you managed to take me to places musing in thought, it's definitely a lovely piece buddy

Hey fam, i appreciate your compliments as usual. I tried a different approach this time. Glad it turned out well. I believe you're posting a piece today. The last I read was unburnt.
Thank you for dropping by.

Yeah I noticed too it seems like it's totally different from your usual poetic pattern and it got me really spiked up to write a piece today lol, wow yeah I'm going to drop one piece on like three hours time, maybe one day we'd definitely work on a piece again.

These images are seductive beautiful ladies.
Your writing got me craving for more

Ask and I'll give you your crave