Something About Your Eyes
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Your eyes are like the hills
It got me looking high
Show me your secrets
Let me unravel you
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Your eyes are like the oceans
It got me surfing on your waves
Take me into your deep
Till I can finally breathe
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Your eyes are like the stars
Through you I could see the universe
Reveal your hidden mystery
Let your evolving aura linger on me
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Your eyes are like fire
It stirs up my burning desire
Purify me in your flames
Saint me with your love
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Your eyes are like the wind
Blow me away with your precious petals
Pollinate my existence with your touch
Let me blossom in your fragrance
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For the first time in a long while I decided to pen down a poem on paper. I usually type so much I've almost forgotten how it feels to write. It sounds weird but it is what it is. I ended up writing in verses which is not my usual style. I kinda like how this came out. Hope you guys love this.
Different similes for different stanzas it's totally amazing, I love the comparisons, the metaphor are top knotch and you managed to take me to places musing in thought, it's definitely a lovely piece buddy
Hey fam, i appreciate your compliments as usual. I tried a different approach this time. Glad it turned out well. I believe you're posting a piece today. The last I read was unburnt.
Thank you for dropping by.
Yeah I noticed too it seems like it's totally different from your usual poetic pattern and it got me really spiked up to write a piece today lol, wow yeah I'm going to drop one piece on like three hours time, maybe one day we'd definitely work on a piece again.
These images are seductive beautiful ladies.
Your writing got me craving for more
Ask and I'll give you your crave