Black widow - Freewrite - Short story

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Black widow


Everything about her was a lie. Even the shawl that wrapped her up and made her look like a shadow, a grieving widow when she was the murderer.

He has seen her, after a time of forgetting that this was once his world. The funeral of her husband, her former life partner, was the occasion. It seems that not only a sad body is buried, but also old dreams.

The world hasn't changed since he left with her. He was caught up in the moment she took him away from his, leaving him in such great pain that he still breathes from his wound.

He cried as if she had killed him then, today he is, and his world has turned upside down because he feels that if she had not woven that web of mysterious seduction, he would be alive with him, loving each other as before she crossed their lives.

(End of five minutes)

He knew she had something to do with his death, as they had written to each other and he told her that he suspected she was up to something, that he was sorry, and when he told her he was leaving her, she laughed and threatened him. Her eyes denounced a plan to end it.

"Mourning imposes respect she does not deserve,"- drowned that thought in turbulent hatred, as she tried to chisel the ice from her gloomy gaze to reveal it to all, for she was but a harpy playing the part of a widow. And, as she swallowed her tears, he said to himself: "She is definitely a witch".






By Zeleira Cordero @zeleiracordero

07/01/2020

In response to the @mariannewest Day 809: 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: shawl. If you're interested, find out here


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Woman by LoganArt

Banner Freewritehouse credit @mariannawest.

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She must be a witch!! Well done!

THANK YOU!

I am a bit confused about the "he's".

Might be she is a witch but those two men are for sure stupid. Why waiting till someone kills you?

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One of the guys decided to experiment with a seductive and mysterious woman. Something went wrong when he got cold feet and the other assumes she was the one who killed him.
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@zeleiracordero Thank you for explaining. I guess the two men were friends? ❤️

@wakeupkitty Because of the way the only character to whom the narrator has access to his thoughts speaks, the two were a couple in the past. 💕

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