Distant Shores - Music Collaboration

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After months of random unplanned intermissions, compliments of reality and obligations at hand, me and the amazing Davood @davidfar finally managed to finish a song that has been such a long time in the making. As per usual, my little scatter brain kept messing up and sadly due to the nature of my recording equipment as well as my location there were some issues that I feel Davood had to work around, such as an unwelcome room echo - yes yes I know, I am a producers nightmare - but hey I am a simple girl after all :D But at the end of the day we ended off on a positive note, and I am happy to share the lovely new release with you!

I wrote this song with the idea of love that is able to stretch over vast distances as well as the trying times that it manages to conjure up, after writing and recording the song I sent it through to Davood, and we started working on the track in a collaborative effort, together we made some alterations that added constructively to the song where after Davood added his magic by means of haunting instrumental melodies including cello, drums, flute and guitar. The end result is an enchanting musical tale of wonder. It really is an honor and a privilege to work with @davidfar who is not only a great musician/magician but also a man with a heart of gold.

Well seeing that I have made you wait such a long time - I guess there is no point in making you wait any longer - You can listen to the track by clicking the image below:
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Or alternatively you can go have a listen on d-sound at: https://dsound.audio/#!/@davidfar/20190722t212340913z-david-far--breezin-distant-shores-new-unique-original-track


Distant Shores; Lyrics~

Distant shores call out my name
While voices within cry out in vane
Frivolous hands toil in torment
Time is lost while days are spent

Time and distance both stretch vast
Hands stretched out but feet earthed fast
The cold night air breathes out again
a wondering mind caught in this flame

Chorus:
I can hear the beating of your heart
over valleys and oceans, tearing us apart
I bow to a joker, I see as a king
And I can walk out a fool or a queen

Fleeting relief from monsters in the dark
Is the luminous glow of your radiant arc
Yet solitude remains my friend
As I reach for the fallen cause again

Echoes of words that slowly comfort me
when time from chains can not break free
Follow my moon and I will chase your sun
we may have time when all is done

Chorus:
I can hear the beating of your heart
over valleys and oceans, tearing us apart
I bow to a joker, I see as a king
And I can walk out a fool or a queen

I drown in your ocean you frolic in my streams
weaving this cloth of our endless dreams
Some illusions are better seen askew
as distance can lend enchantment to view

place hope in tomorrow, pray it doesn’t stray
keep the faith we’ll find a way
Distant voice from a distant shore
Feed the hunger, evermore

Chorus:
I can hear the beating of your heart
over valleys and oceans, tearing us apart
I bow to a joker, I see as a king
And I can walk out a fool or a queen

Feel free to let me know what you think!



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I listened to it. It was great!

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Thank you so much for your feedback!

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After listening to a lot of music to find someone to reward I was so happy to come across your collaboration with @davidfar

This transported me to an Irish - folklore kind of mood. I love your voice and I believe that David certainly added "hauntingly" beautiful cello, drums, bass and guitar. I believe many people will relate to your beautiful lyrics as well.
Well done on a very beautiful collaboration - I loved it

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Aw thank you so much - I really appreciate this :D
Much Love <3

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pure love for this..

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Thank you so much Torico - I really appreciate this.

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hmm, what is BURN?

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its something CC is doing to help encourage coin growth. its good for you because you get a resteem. good for CC because we get to burn coins equal to you post payout :)

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Ah ok, that's so cool, thank you for clearing that up for me <3

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Brilliant, you two! Loved it.

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So glad that you enjoyed it, all the positive feedback warms my heart

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I love it, you are an amazing person @breezin.

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One of the things that makes me amazing, is having you in my life!

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You looking for collaborations with other artists?

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I am always open to suggestions and collaborations :D

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I'm working on a few open source programs to get some things done... I'm also doing a musicoin giveaway and a separate contest if you're interested that.

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