RE: 500 Words a Day — Bird Lessons — 21.7.2020
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Oh wow. I said that you were a prodigious talent and I meant it. I was actually really enjoying the story as it was. A nice tale of a person overcoming covid and changing their path in life getting prepared for the future and turning to alternative means. That by itself was very well written.
The twist at the end however caught me cold. I wasn't expecting it to finish like that which has all the stamps of a good writer. Gripping story line, well written with a dirty twist to finish it off.
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Thank you. I can start writing happy uplifting tales, but they rarely end that way. I watched The Twilight Zone too much when I was a kid?
No thanks. i like this style much better. Happy endings are for disney movies, not for real life.
I had the same style of writing growing up too. I remember writing an essay for my English final exams that descended into a man in prison getting eaten by rats. It did get me a high result though. 😂
I can't remember the context for it but I do remember the finish to my essay. I'm sure it stood out among the rest of the people writing about their summer holidays or whatever the went with.