RE: Just Another Day
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Excellent work, @bruno-kema. You set the stage for disaster very well, and give us a scenario, a character whose plight we care about, a frightening conflict and a great resolution — all the elements of a great story.
As always, we ask that our community members read and comment on at least two other writers' stories each week. Thank you!
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