RE: The Jump

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The first thing that jumps out (Yes, jumps!) is that either you've done a lot of parachuting, or, you did research. Every good writer does research, otherwise stories are not believable. Excellent job in describing the scene, creating characters and building suspense.

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Hehe.... 😁
I've actually never done any parachuting, i just did the research on movies, books and google. Google helps every time.
And as always, i'll keep engaging with fellow writers. And i'm glad i posted in this community.

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