RE: THE ARC - FUSING ALL 4 ELEMENTS OF A STORY TOGETHER | The Ink Well Fast and Furious Festival - Day 4
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A very intriguing story! I think I will have to read it again because it is deep and with much distress. Those shades of suffering and anxiety were very well expressed.
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Thank you so much for your visit and stay to review my story. Yes, much suffering and anxiety. But now he has found his family. They sent him away to live in a boarding house that was not a pleasant experience. But he finds a friend there who gets word to his nephew that he's unhappy there. Now he has hope his nephew will return and take him away with him.