RE: No Happy Birthday: The Inkwell Prompt #16/ Your Birthday.
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I liked your story, @bruno-kema. The emotions are vivid. We can feel the frustration and the anger; fortunately, the boy was not too emotional or depressed as to have reacted in dangerous ways.
I think the family might have gone too far, but I guess it's a cultural matter--or a family thing--. It was close to evil if you ask me, but sweet Busky was there to make us feel better about this super prank.
I liked the rhythm you keep in your narrative :)
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Thank you very much @marlyncabrera, Busky was really sweet indeed. Helping to distract our protagonist.
I'm glad you like the story, thank you for reading.