RE: Memoirs | The Ink Well Fast and Furious Festival - Day Two
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Task 4 described a spectacular scenario! I loved it!
Task 3. I am impressed with how you told Grainger's story. Now she has a past that we know about. Wonderful and deep storytelling!
Task 2. I also notice here the depth of your story.
Now though, I couldn't get the picture of her mired in blood out of my head.
Neither could I! You got me into the story in a fantastic way.
Task 1. Elegant narrative to describe the space and at the same time tell a short story.
I'm amazed that you completed all 4 tasks in an exquisite style. Congratulations!
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