RE: Alexithymia / Alexitimia - The Ink Well Prompt #14: Railroad
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Oh my, you hit it out of the ballpark with this one, @jadams2k18. So much of this story is told by saying very little, and holding back on over-explaining. The "condition" of the narrator... what could it possibly be, that keeps him from becoming alarmed at an invasion of zombies? Many writers would have been compelled to describe these horrid things in gruesome detail. But it's not needed. The story is very gripping and compelling with the small details you provided. Well done.
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Thank you very much, my dear @jayna. ^_^
Coming from you, that's a great compliment. Step by step I'm getting better and better. I really enjoy writing stories, but I still have a long way to go.