RE: Tracks

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Great work, @bruno-kema! This could actually be a great submission for this week's prompt, which challenges writers to write a story that integrates action, dialog and narrative. You do that beautifully.

I love the fact that you often write from a female's perspective. I can really relate to that, as I often write from the male perspective. It seems to free me up to create the story without getting involved and somehow making it about me.

There are some great lines in this story. Like this one:

"Godspeed princess. When you hear the shot, run like hell."

That's great dialog, right there!



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Hello @jayna

It seems to free me up to create the story without getting involved and somehow making it about me.

This is really how it is for me as well. I'm able to look at the story from a perspective quite different from mine.
I already have a story for this week's prompt, i hope it cuts it🙃
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like the story.

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