RE: The Jump

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I enjoyed this story very much, @bruno-kema. The interplay between the men is great. Segun certainly came down a notch after his haughty attitude when he shoved Nathan out of the plane!

I loved the description of those moments before he pulls the parachute chord, and how his fear disappears. I jumped out of a plane once, and I had no fear at all once I was falling. It was just exhilarating. And once the chord is pulled and you are sailing down, it's a very peaceful, sublime feeling!



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I'm glad I was able to get the descriptions well, seeing as i've never done it before. Although it's something I would like to do sometime soon.
Thank you @jayna, i'm glad you like the story.

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