RE: THE ARC - FUSING ALL 4 ELEMENTS OF A STORY TOGETHER | The Ink Well Fast and Furious Festival - Day 4

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Sensitive story about life in extreme need, which is nevertheless a hopeful story and a clinging to life despite old age and poverty.

I loved the description of the nephew walking away, among the many descriptions you make based on the image.
A story that begins with distant childhood and is projected: "" Not this time, "I said to myself out loud with a daring laugh.""
Thanks @justclickindiva

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Thank you so much @gracielaacevedo for visiting my Day 4 story arc. I tried to be as descriptive as possible to show the elements in the photo. Yes, the old man started out in poverty after the death of his parents to disease. He had a hard life, but he did survive.

Having to now go into a boarding house he didn't like. But he is hopeful his nephew will return and take him away from that place.

I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and your keen observations.

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I loved the description of the nephew walking away, among the many descriptions you make based on the image.

Yes, and the birds, hovering as harbingers of death and ill fortune.

Insightful comment, @gracielaacevedo

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