I discovered beauty / Descubrí la belleza
In this new poetic challenge organized by @theinkwell, I participate by letting myself be carried away by the theme of beauty.
The contest rules are available at the following Link
En este nuevo desafío poético organizado por @theinkwell, participo dejándome llevar por el tema de la belleza.
Las bases del concurso están disponibles en el siguiente enlace
I discovered beauty
in the sublime creation
in original grace
that is born of love.
I discovered it in your hands
in your affections
and your innocence.
I discovered the beauty
When your soul and mine
they melted into a hug.
When you looked at me
with curious eyes
for the first time.
My girl Gala
loving creature.
Always keep
next to your smile
that's the naive beauty
that lives inside you
Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)
Descubrí la belleza
en la creación sublime
en la gracia original
que nace del amor.
La descubrí en tus manos
en tu ternura
y tu inocencia.
Descubrí la belleza
Cuando tu alma y la mía
se fundieron en un abrazo.
Cuando me miraste
con ojos curiosos
por primera vez.
Mi niña Gala
amorosa criatura.
Conserva siempre
junto a tu sonrisa
esa, la belleza ingenua
que habita dentro ti
The photograph is my property and was taken with my cell phone camera
La fotografía es de mi propiedad y fue tomada con la cámara de mi teléfono móvil
Beautiful poetic prose, mother's love is the most sublime connotation of love, I think the word that best describes love is precisely the love of a mother, I liked the whole context of the poem, good luck in the challenge, greetings 🙂
Thank you for your words @jakim7, they are very true and even more so when multiplied by two as in my case I write them from a grandmother's perspective
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Qué bella poesía. Has tenido la mejor idea, el concepto de una de las altas bellezas! gracias, @evagavilan
Eso pasa cuando la belleza se siente aunque no podamos verla. Gracias por tu comentario querida @gracielaacevedo