RE: The Inkwell Contest: Week One Draft- No Strangers
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This is a magnificent story. The only thing I need to mention is to watch your tenses ... there is a little shifting between the present and the past tense that is confusing. Others have mentioned the typos, and something I do to control typos in my stories is to read them aloud so that they pop up on my tongue.
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Thank you very much.