RE: Bullets And Pads

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Hello @bruno-kema,
I once tried to write a battle scene. No matter how many times I went back and rewrote that scene, it fell flat. So, I appreciate the challenge of making this story come to life. Although, it doesn't seem to have been a challenge for you.

I liked the father. I liked the son. What an interesting motivation for going to the pharmacy. Even the pharmacist touched me, trapped as he is in that place.

Great job. Always a pleasure to read your stories.



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Thank you very much @agmoore. I'm quite speechless right now. The story took me over an hour to write and then two rewrites to get it into this state.
And i'm glad you think i make it seem like it's without challenge, i guess that means there's something i'm doing right.
And that gives me joy.
Thank you once more for reading, i'm glad you like the story.

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