A picture is worth a thousand words - 5. "A symbol of my Love"
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Freewrite House invites us to the contest A picture is worth a thousand words - 5, where as always we are asked to write about an image, through a poem, a story or simply describe what you see and what you feel about the image, I leave the link for you to participate and have fun creating a great post about it:
prompt by @the.artist-98
@marito74
prompt by @the.artist-98
Story: "A symbol of my Love"
Ricardo was a very attractive and wealthy young man,he loved to dress fashionably and show off his gold garments,especially a beautiful and valuable bracelet inherited from his great-great-grandfather,which he always wore;however his vanity generated many emotional problems ,because the young man suffered from delusions of persecution,every time he passed somewhere he felt that he was being followed and this happened constantly.
His family was very concerned about his behavior, because Ricardo refused to seek medical help, even his girlfriend at the time separated from him, because she could no longer tolerate the situation. The family had hidden his origin from the young man,the wealthy couple could not have children and a humble girl who worked in the house ,wanted to give the baby a better life,in return the couple offered to reward her very well; however this refused the help and in return she begged him to give her a nice gold bracelet when he was older,the woman also gave away the only valuable thing she had besides her son.
With the passing of time the young man fell in love with a humble young woman,for which he visited a lot a humble village,one night he was near the house of his lover,when suddenly ,his car began to fail,he had forgotten to fill it with gasoline,suddenly he found himself in the middle of the road,he looked for the flashlight,tried to light it in the middle of several failed attempts,you can imagine the anguish of this young man who suffered from these delusions; His first reaction was to remain petrified, coupled with this he heard some incessant noises, to illuminate with the flashlight he spotted a shack and a lady trying to get up.
The young man without thinking ran to her, helped her up and she sobbed and asked him to help her husband; with the light of the flashlight, he could see what was the origin of the noises, a pipe had broken, the man was lying on the water, apparently he had suffered a heart attack and hit the table, the force of the water had caused the house to flood and the noise was caused by the water hitting the objects floating on the ground.
The first reaction of the young man was to help the gentleman,he immediately contacted his private doctor who in a short time appeared with an ambulance and took him to the nearest Medical Center where he could recover,it turns out that the lady was the biological mother of the young man, who had been following him,recognizing the bracelet,she had lost track of the family years ago,but when she saw the young man she knew he was her son,she never had any more children,the young man upon learning the story embraced his mother and compensated her with love,dedication and all the comforts her fortune could provide.
@marito74
Thanks to Freewrite House for these spaces that as always awaken our muses,I wish you all the best,see you on the road.
EN ESPAÑOL
Freewrite House nos invita al Concurso Una imagen vale más que mil palabras – 5,donde como siempre se nos pide que dada una imagen escribamos sobre esta,a través de un poema,una historia o sencillamente describir que ves y que sientes respecto a la imagen,te dejo el link para que participes y te diviertas creando un genial post al respecto:
"Un Símbolo de mi Amor"
@marito74
Gracias a Freewrite House por estos espacios que como siempre despiertan a nuestras musas,les deseo lo mejor,nos vemos en el camino.
prompt by @the.artist-98
"Un Símbolo de mi Amor"
Ricardo era un joven muy atractivo y acaudalado,le encantaba vestir a la moda y mostrar sus prendas de oro,en especial una hermosa y valiosa pulsera herencia de su tatarabuelo,la cual siempre portaba;no obstante su vanidad le generaba muchos problemas emocionales ,pues el joven sufría de delirios de persecución,cada vez que pasaba por algún lugar sentía que lo seguían y esto pasaba constantemente.
Su familia estaba muy preocupada por su comportamiento,debido a que Ricardo se rehusaba a buscar ayuda médica,hasta su novia de ese entonces se separó de el,pues ya no podía tolera mas la situación.La familia le había ocultado al joven su origen,la pareja de adinerados no podía tener hijos y una humilde muchacha que trabajó en la casa ,quiso darle al bebé una vida mejor,a cambio la pareja le ofreció recompensarla muy bien; sin embargo esta rechazó la ayuda y a cambio le rogó que le dieran una linda pulsera de oro cuando este fuera mayor, la mujer se desprendió también de lo único valioso que tenía aparte de su hijo.
Con el pasar del tiempo el joven se enamoró de una humilde joven,por lo cual visitaba mucho un humilde pueblo,una noche se encontraba cerca de la casa de su enamorada,cuando de repente ,su carró empezó a fallar,había olvidado surtirlo de gasolina,de repente se encontró en medio del camino,buscó la linterna,trato de encenderla en medio de varios intentos fallidos,se imaginarán la angustia de este joven quien sufría de estos delirios; su primera reacción fue quedarse petrificado,aunado a esto se escuchaban unos ruidos incesantes,al alumbrar con la linterna divisó una casucha y una señora tratando de levantarse.
El joven sin pensarlo corrió hacía ella, la ayudó a levantarse y esta entre sollozos le pidió que ayudara a su esposo;con la luz de la linterna,pudo ver cual era el origen de los ruidos,se había roto una tubería ,el señor yacía sobre el agua,al parecer había sufrido un ataque cardiaco y se golpeó con la mesa,la fuerza del agua había provocado que la casa se inundara y el ruido lo provocaba el agua al golpear los objetos que flotaban en el suelo.
La primera reacción del joven fue ayudar al señor,se comunicó inmediatamente con su médico particular quien en poco tiempo apareció con una ambulancia y lo llevaron al Centro Médico mas cercano donde pudo recuperarse,resulta que la señora era la madre biológica del joven,la cual lo había estado siguiendo,al reconocer la pulsera,había perdido el rastro hacía años de la familia,pero al ver al joven supo que era su hijo,ella nunca tuvo mas hijos,el joven al conocer la historia abrazó a su madre y la compensó con amor,dedicación y todas las comodidades que su fortuna podía brindar.
@marito74
Gracias a Freewrite House por estos espacios que como siempre despiertan a nuestras musas,les deseo lo mejor,nos vemos en el camino.
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https://twitter.com/marito742/status/1358940419258802176
Great story.
Hello,thank you very much.
Wowww.. and that was how the mother and the son reunited after several years of being seperated.
Nice story from Margarito.
I wonder if this revelation will help to cut short the issue that the young man was having
Hello friend, haha, well, he did not really have delusions, it was simply a feeling that did not leave him alone, the destiny that sooner or later comes to you.
Beautiful story, i love the reunite.
Well written dear.
Hello, thank you very much for the comment. Greetings from Margarita.
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