ZAPFIC #MICROFICTION #Writingcontest | My entry to week 115: Prompt - Forget

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"Was it worth it", echoed a voice from within.

She was still in shock while staring at the dead body.

She got angry and pushed her husband to his death, just because he forgot to get her a gift to mark their third year wedding anniversary.


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That was a bit harsh don't you think @lebey1 just because he forgot her wedding anniversary gift. Probably this side of her should have emerged before the wedding. Poor husband would hopefully saw this and still be alive to rethink his decision to marry her. Good luck in the contest. Nice to meet you.

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I think so. But the plot denotes that anger isn't helpful. She might have pushed him away in anger but she wasn't expecting him to die as a result of the push

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I gathered that it was unexpected. But the fact that there is an underlying out-of-control anger.

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Now I get. Will try to be more lenient on my character next time

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