Nothing Lasts | Zapfic

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"Why would you do this?" Marie’s tremulous voice broke.

Four hundred feet down, waves were crashing onto cliff rocks.

All Marie heard was her friend saying, “Nothing lasts – even Mike’s love” before she was shoved, headlong, over the edge.

This is my entry for @felt.buzz's lovely Zapfic contest. I've always enjoyed writing these Zapfics - it has been a good "workout" for my writing muscles.

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This is short and precise, but with an unexpected ending. A shocking run of a few words with an unexpected ending. I liked it...
Thank you for sharing.

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Thanks for the kind words @jgb!! (: Glad you dropped by! (:

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Oh no!! She was shoved off the edge? That is soooo 😨
Short and impactful! That is zapfic! :)

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