RE: Revenge
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Ah yes, the old 15 minute 5 minute free write...Worth the 4 minutes to read mate, nice one!
beware the folly of cruelty for its penance is paid in the silence of the night.
I like this ominous line at the end...You make that up? Cool!
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Yup. Glad you enjoyed it. Wanted to leave it at a point that lets the reader imagine how the rest of the night unfolds.
A bit of mystery never goes astray...
Never. Intrigue is always good. Not sure if ill do a follow-up on the story though. I think its at a good place to leave it.