This #freewrite was written in five minutes using @mariannewest’s prompt:

Vertical Antenna

https://beta.steemit.com/hive-161155/@mariannewest/day-819-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-vertical-antenna

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"You're not coming in so you might as well just piss off."

The man was huge and blocked the door with his bulk. John knew wouldn't stand a chance in a physical confrontation. He tried a different approach.

"Please!" he said, his voice sounding a little pathetic to his ears. "I have a ticket! I have been wanting to see Vertical Antenna live for so long. And I saved all my pocket money." He summoned up the tears that were not far away. "And it may be my last chance." He sobbed. "I have cancer."

The man stopped for a moment and looked at John. Did John detect a flicker of sympathy?

"You don't look ill," the man said eventually. "You are too young, kid. This club has a strict over twenty one age limit. Unless you have ID proving you are over twenty one, you ain't getting in." He paused. Then, "Even if you are dying."

John sighed.

"What am I to do with this ticket?" he asked.

The man shrugged.

"Not my problem. But if I see you selling it here I'll get you arrested." He pointed to a sign above the door: Buying from ticket touts is illegal.

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As usual I wrote the freewrite in five minutes using themostdangerouswritingapp.com and then copied and pasted it into a googledoc, tied it up a bit.

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