"Enjoy the day" a five minute freewrite

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This #freewrite was written in five minutes using @mariannewest’s prompt:

enjoy the day

https://steempeak.com/hive-161155/@mariannewest/day-829-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-enjoy-the-day

"Enjoy the day!" the woman smiled and passed Clive his coffee. He scowled at her.

"I'm going to my father's funeral," he said. "I'll do my best."

The smile fell from the woman's face with an almost audible clatter. Clive dropped the money on the counter and walked off. Amy smiled at the woman and followed him.

"Why do you do that?" she asked as he sat himself down at the table by the window.

"What?" he asked, removing the plastic top from the coffee. Amy watched as he began pouring sugar into the large paper cup.

"Making people feel bad," she said.

"I get sick of listening to the robots," he said. "The corporate robotic statements: 'have a nice day', 'enjoy the day", whatever. It gets on my nerves." Clive stirred the sugar into the coffee in violent swirls of his hand.

"But you made the woman feel bad. For no good reason. Your dad is fine, why would you tell her you're going to his funeral?"

As usual I wrote the freewrite in five minutes using themostdangerouswritingapp.com and then copied and pasted it into a googledoc, tied it up a bit.
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I cannot help but this one made me smile. Partly Clive is right. Still, I hope you have a great day.💕

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I somehow had to laugh about this one and partly agree with Clive on the other hand... Many never hear this not even once a week.

Still, I hope you have a great day.
!trdo 💕

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Some people are just sadistic. I'm so impressed that you use that app! I used it once, wrote something spectacularly good, then have failed to come up with anything else I would publish using it. Kudos to you!

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Clive definitely shook up the fakery there!

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