bird in duel || Original Poem

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of branches
A bird crying in a duel,
Angry at the arrival of the others .

there was a day when
It liked this forest.
There was a day when it liked every moment here.

there was a day when
This was the basis of flights.
Then it always liked the cloud on the wing.

of banyans
the bird carrying the shade,
Angry at the dark body of the clouds.

God knows
What kind of winds came from which direction?
All the vines kept bowing towards the golden deer.

is tired
Here it is, full of resistance in its throat.
It is quite possible that now it breaks all the practices.

in screaming
Vowels at last lost the Bird,
It gets angry at every word of the cuckoos.

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I didn't understand the part "Vowel All Lost Birds" could you explain?


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Ahh, soory for this cryptic language, its kind of my style, I try to add unique flavour to my poetry. Let me simply explain you, the bird in duel always fights, screams at others and thus it lost its voice, now it only listens to cuckoo. Hope you get it


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It's a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it. It seems like it could apply to virtually any person experiencing life.


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Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it. Appreciate your kind words. Yeah the idea was to connect it to any persons life, you got that right. 😊🙏


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