The end is the beginning - POB-WOTW - Paradox

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Wake up
Open your eyes
Take a look around
Is this the life you want?
You've been trying so hard
Always looking for something else
Searching in a never ending road of thorns
Always going after what you can never achieve
Going round and round in the pathway
Maybe is time to stop trying that
You know what you want
You can get it now
This is the key
Unlock it
Move

Now read again
Starting from the end

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This is my short entry to the POB Word of The Week #4, a really cool contest by @calumam. I suggested this word for him, and had to make an entry. I know it's not the best one I can do, but my time is running short, so here it is! Make sure you take part on it, the prizes are super sweet!

Thanks for reading until here!
Keep posting and keep shining!

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Wow, nice poem and style, fireguardian. Very creative! Reads smoothly starting from the top and the bottom.


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wow friend if you surprised me with this post I love creativity and the way everything fits from top to bottom and from bottom to top ... Bravo! have some ! PIZZA


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The first read-through was excellent, I connected. I started to have trouble reading it backwards though, maybe I'm doing it wrong...

end the from starting
again read now
move
it unlock
key the is this
now it get can you
want you what know you
that trying stop time is maybe
pathway the in round and round going
achieve never can you what after going always
thorns of road ending never a in searching
else something for looking always
hard trying been you've
want? you life the this is
around look a take
eyes your open
up wake

lol, I know what you meant ;)


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Bela poesia, o titulo do post me lembrou de Dark, mas teve um rumo totalmente diferente, ou seria rumos? Apesar que no fim, o resultado é meio que mesmo, de qualquer forma, genial!!


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Ótimo texto e eu curti muito a ideia do "leia novamente... agora de trás para frente" (ficou parecendo aquelas reviravoltas nos finais de filmes de suspense/terror... haha!).

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Awww... I definitely love it. You were so clever. ! It is a nice poem with a beautiful reflection.


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Now read again
Starting from the end

Oh shit! This is was an hynosis cos I found myself going up to read it again .......hahahahhaa

It is true we don't even know if we are living the life that we want, so we ought to wake up, and use the various keys available to unlock them

Great poem, thank you for this

I wish you luck in the contest dear


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Mmm. Made sense when read from the end too. Quite cool👍
The word paradox is just so wide, look how well this write-up fit into it.


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