The sheep's magical adventure my own short story page 1 to be continued

Hello everyone here's a a creation I created out of my own original photographs and this is my first part of my short story

This is the front cover what's your thoughts about should I keep it or change it ?

It all started one day a sheep escaped from mudchute farm he made it to this alleyway he was thinking where to go next then he had a Idea

He decided to go to another farm to get some friends to go on a magical adventure

Here's the colour version of my cover image

Here's the first page colourful version

Here's the first page finished version what's your thoughts any help and advice would be appreciated

Thanks for reading and viewing this post I hope that you liked it and the sheep's magical adventure has just begun