A Pop-up WeWrite Contest: I Married A Monster

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My response to @owasco's short story contest using the following prompt and adding to her story.

Check out the details on her post Here.

The prompt-

The Sandwich

"Ugh! The bread is soaking wet! Bread is not supposed to be soaking wet!" he snarled at me as he spit a soggy mouthful of half-chewed peanut butter sandwich into a tissue. I stood at attention next to his bed. He handed the sodden and heavy tissue to me.

He was now vegan, grain free, nightshade free, lectin free, phytic acid free, and deaf to my feeble protestations. He was not free, however, from his acutely tuned palate, which was maddeningly different from mine.

He had requested a peanut butter sandwich. I knew meeting all his new diet criteria would be a bitch, but I rose to the challenge. I had to.

I chose a very small ten-dollar loaf of 'bread' and bought it. I bought some raw peanuts. I shelled the peanuts. I soaked, sprouted, and dehydrated the peanuts. After very lightly roasting them, I ground those peanuts into peanut butter. I then very carefully smeared the freshly ground peanut butter onto the somewhat normal looking bread. I made sure to get the peanut butter to the edges just like I had learned in home economics class long, long ago.

I knew how to make a proper tea sandwich.

I now spent my life trying to make this man happy. I signed up for that didn't I? Wasn’t that my reason for being? To make this man happy?

Well, he was not happy with that sandwich.

My continuation-


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In my naivety, I thought married life would turn out the way I anticipated - happy, full of glorious celebrations and cherished by the man I loved.

Bradley had smashed that dream for me shortly after our hasty marriage. Within a few dates he had convince me he didn’t have long to live and we needed to have quality time together.

With the innocence of youth, I agreed to forsake my dream wedding of being surrounded by family and friends and happily accompanied him to City Hall for a quick ‘I do.’ A clerk was our witness.

I had imagined my married life one way but it was swiftly turning out another.

HIs hypochondriac needs started to drain me physically and emotionally. Bradley had his doctor on speed dial and every time someone mentioned an illness he was sure it had befallen him.

I spend more time with my husband in the doctor’s waiting room than my own living room.

Bradley demanded my sole attention and had complete control over what clothes I wore. Jealousy would raise it’s ugly head and if he thought a dress or skirt looked too sexily he would pull it out of shape.

Slowly he isolated me from life-long friends by constantly criticizing and insulting them. Wanting to be the perfect partner, no matter how I felt, I always agreed with his unreasonable opinions. Isn’t this what a good wife does?

Loneliness and depression were becoming part of my life without a close friend to confide in.

Five long years of this merry-go-round had passed and Bradley finally contacted a serious life threatening disease, COPD (Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease).

He had never smoked and blamed his illness on too much dust and cat dander in our tiny apartment. This being the result of my poor housekeeping skills and the dammed cat he despised. Now the disease had progressed to the point where he could no longer walk or dress himself.

With only the TV to keep him company when I wasn’t at his beck and call, he listened to every food show and was convinced the additives in food were making his disease worse.

I spent hours roaming specially shops for foods he would eat. Now he had spit out that expensive bread. I was getting sick of beating myself up to please hm. The last straw was yesterday when forbade me to visit my ailing mother in another city.

I could feel an evil smile spreading across my lips as I imaged the peanut butter sandwich laced with arsenic...

...end of story.

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It's a pleasure to see how much variation does this prompt could bring. From a 5 billion dollar fortune that's the wife gets after his death to a tiny apartment, which makes the dream of his death only the matter of revenge. Great work!

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Thanks @gaft1! There are some wonderful variations to the prompt. My poor wife didn’t get much monetary rewards except freedom. 😂

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Yes! The tide turns, finally, and she sees her escape. I hope she has a hefty life insurance policy on the guy. What a sorry ass creep. The most horrible thing about this is that there are a lot of creeps just like him married to women with no way out.

Thank you for your wonderful entry!

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Hi @owasco. Love your description of him as a sorry ass creep. There definitely are similar situations that women find themselves in.

The pulling of dresses and skirts out of shape so the wife doesn’t look good was actually based on a story a friend told me about her 1st marriage.

Her ex was extremely jealous and would do things like this craziness and she found out later he was exposing himself by leaving the door of their apartment open and exposing himself to women that passed by in the hallway.

Thankfully there were no children and she was able to escape the marriage with the help of her parents.

You can’t make this stuff up!

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The truth is more unbelievable than fiction. The flasher at his own apartment door - seriously?? - and making the wife look frumpy as a way to control her or the attention she gets? Horrible.
Where did she find arsenic.... will she get away with it... why should HE get away with his abuse for years on end??

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Unbelievable but true. This acquaintance was told that after she went to work he was flashing visitors to the apartments in the building when they passed his door. He’d sit on the couch with a towel over his privates and wait. I guess he’d pick and chose who to flash. A real sicko!

Maybe she couldn’t find arsenic and had to use rat poison.

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Of all the people who die young... why can't it be the creeps!

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Yeah! Serves him right for cheating and abuse.
Maybe he doesn't show a good heart thinking about murder, but the thought crosses his mind... right?
I really like your story, @redheadpei. In my version, the poor woman's mind crosses over killing him, too.

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Thanks @zeleiracordero. I’m happy you like my version. Yours is great. We both were thinking the same way out of a bad situation.

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Dang good writing. For a moment there I thought this was a real post.

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Very well written! I was thinking along the lines of the wife at the end too. lol

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Thanks Deb. That kind of husband makes one think along those lines. 😂

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Oh these short stores really are bringing out the evil side within, awesome retort!

Almost like becoming the bully in reverse gear, good warning going up via excellent story telling.

!BEER

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Great job @redheadpei! No hiding anything, he's just got to go! I like it! :) The arsenic reminds me of "Arsenic and Old Lace."

My mother was a bit of a hypochondriac. My earliest years were filled with constant fear she was going to die, because she had so many things "wrong with her."

It was both sad and fitting in a way, I guess, that she died from Alzheimer's and she never even knew she had it, as she didn't know anyone or anything and couldn't even eat most of her last year.

She lived to the ripe old age of 79 though! :)

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Thanks for sharing this @free-reign. It must have been quite dramatizing for you worrying about her. I know what it means to have a sick mother. I was the oldest child and witnessed it all.

My mother was ill with heart trouble all her life fro having rheumatic fever as a child. After each child‘s birth she got worse. She survived 2 heart operations and died at 66. I sometimes think about this and how now I am older than my mother.

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Your mother had several kids, right? My sister, who is 2 years older than I am, had rheumatic fever at some point when she was very young, but she's been pretty healthy her whole life otherwise. But she only had 2 kids. I wonder if having more kids was just too hard on your mom, and if it probably would have been drastic to my sister's health also if she'd had more kids.

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Yes I was the oldest of five kids. I think the hard work required to keep the household running and family fed was not good for her. Lack of money would add to the stress.

Mom was a war bride and coming to Canada and seeing how Dad’s mother and the other women worked she tried to keep up and never told anyone she was ill.

I wrote her war bride story in 2006 and it is on file at pier 21 at the Museum in Halifax Nova Scotia where she ( and I) first arrived in Canada to join my father. I’ll leave you the link but don’t feel you have to read it. :)
https://pier21.ca/content/the-immigration-story-of-catherine-collicott-irish-war-bride

I just checked the story and see the photos have been eliminated and the story ends abruptly without the last few paragraphs. I guess it was too long. Lol.

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My maternal grandfather came to the US from Ireland and married my grandmother. I never got a chance to meet him though, as he died before I was born. I found a picture of the ship you and your mom came to Halifax aboard. They changed its name to "Captain Cook." It appears the photo is not in the public domain though, which is kind of strange.

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Gosh and begorra it’s nice you have a drop or two of the blood from the old sod in ye. ☘️ I wonder what part of Ireland your grandfather came from. Was it during the potato famine or before?

I never met my grandfathers. They were deceased before I was born.

I don’t know why they left the pictures out of the war bride story. They had them there at first. Maybe so many stories they were trying to save space.

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Great job redheadpei! I really enjoyed owasco's start to this story and you really kept up the great writing!

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Thanks Cowboy! I think we all gave the sorry assed creep a slight nudge to the promise land.

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The sorry assed creep. lol..I agree. But I don't think he was headed to the Promise Land!

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Hi,
I like the way you describe an obsessive personality, without calling it that. And I like the way you show the disease progressing. At the end, when she thinks of arsenic, I was a little surprised. It seemed a little outside her personality. All she has to do is wait a little longer and nature will finish him off for her :))
A good story. Sorry I missed the voting deadline. I'll hunt down another post and give the vote there.
Regards,
AG

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Thanks @agmoore and for stopping by. You didn’t think arsenic was part of her arsenal but you never know when a person could be driven to destructive thoughts. 😊

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HaHa. True. I'll be nicer to my husband :)))

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