Running Water -5minutefreewrite

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The water runs from the house to the stream. It never stops moving. I don't know how it has so much energy! I mean, if I run downhill like that, my knees and shins start to hurt. I'm glad that I have my father's laziness, because otherwise I'd have my mother's pains.

I look up, and I see the TV before me. It beckons me. Come, it says. Come and enjoy the delights of the internal world of fiction. Joy let you light up. Joy let you dim down. And moreover. Moreover, there are two or three autumns asking for the rains to come. Fall. Fall. Fall up fall down. Fall into a circle and capture all the gentle effervescence.

DO you ever become aware of how problematic your vocabulary is when you're talking ahead of yourself? You think, OH MY, where did these ideas come from? I don't have these ideas?

Words like running water. Falling from great heights. Is rain running water? No, just falling water, but when water comes from the faucet, we say it is running water, but it is also just falling water. pah pah pah. Oh dogs and cats and rabbits and senseless carrots.



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Oh, I love this one and the way the words spill ahead like water!

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