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Dreams Cokes True 1
Crashing on the floor with the screen in pieces, the way gadgets are made in this age is as delicate as an egg, all transparent and full of multimillion encryption that can transmit beyond kingdoms and realms.

With a figure so unique and stylishly quiet, the way Damian looked at his mother for the first time in his entire life was different, a part of him wanted to ask why she did so wickedly by dropping him on earth, the lowest planet, why not Mars the planets of the rich, a slave on Mars is an earth kingdom CEO. If she doesn't want to to have children, fine. But why having something you cannot take care of. and to cap it all, how will he ever ask her who his father was. Many of this questions ran through Damian's mind all in a second, he couldn't just keep it to himself but wept.

The warmth he has envisioned all his life embraced him softly, putting a kiss on his forehead.
"Am so sorry honey, am so sorry" sobbing heavily as she said those words, melting Damian's heart and mind, washing away in a second all the bitterness and anger he has bottled up in himself to do the woman who dares dumped him. All gone now. All that remains is tears, tears of reconciliation and joy of a new beginning.

His mom didn't say much, at close contact shows she has lost some memories, a part of her is gone, looking into the right part of her head with something that looks like an hotspots antenna shows she has been operated upon. Damian feared her mum might have been made a cyborg already.

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The woman proved his greatest fear right by repeating some words diabolicaly, she brought out a picture and showed Damian, the boy hoping to hear something about it but all the lips tired woman could say is "home".

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This is very cool!! Different from your usual style. I like it a lot!

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You got that right, @mariannewest. Finally something with a non-gruesome theme and low enough payout that I can tipu!

@tipu curate

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Hi @botefarm

thanks for the great story, I enjoyed it

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The reason am writing is still get better, am thinking you can point out one or two things to make the story better. That's why I wrote.

But it's a pity many comtest I wrote for just say the same thing you're saying : "It's good", "Thanks for the great entry" and so on.

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yes, I understand what you mean @botefarm

Feedback is often short and this is also true of others who comment.
But no matter how short my message is, I also show that I have read the story before giving an upvote.

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Some things never change, a mother who can't cope, a son who can't forgive no matter how he tries. Great sci-fi fiction! See you tomorrow with the prompt!

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Manto de nieve sobre rocas que se va formando por diferentes estratos o capas de nieve que se van produciendo a lo largo de la temporada, las capas en la medida que se van formando presentan ciertas características morfológicas dependiendo de la temperatura. La nieve puede ser húmeda o muy seca.
En otro orden de ideas en el diseño se aprecia una espesa capa de neblina suspendida, a través de la que, una tenue luz provenientes de copiosas estrellas, lo que permite quede expuesta a nuestros ojos tan magnífica obra de arte

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Waoh, muchas gracias por el desglose de la imagen.

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