Hungry dreamy of dreams - Freewrite short story

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Hungry dreamy of dreams


When the dream faded, I chased after him, hopeful. It seemed impossible that it would happen just after Christmas Eve, where magic is supposed to work miracles.

But, this time no, there were no miracles to believe in, or yes, one so big that it goes unnoticed and slips through the cracks where the perplexed soul leaves its dreams at the inside of a house... but outside is life.

My inner voice said: "describe your morning feeling in the Christmas of your dreams," and without much thought, I muttered, "It will be in my dreams, because in reality there are no constructive feelings, only apathy and old-fashioned conditioning: sleep, sleep a lot."

And the free flow of consciousness confronted me: "But that is not a feeling, but an impression caused by the tiredness of a year that falls like snow on the paintings."

"I've never played in the snow."

"That is something that can be smelled as part of the time, perceived as part of what the soul reveals in the lifelessness."

(End of five minutes)

"Basically, on Christmas morning, I'm like a child, I'm just hungry and dreamy of dreams."

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By Zeleira Cordero @zeleiracordero

25/12/2019

In response to @mariannewest to the Day 796: 5 Minute Freewrite: Friday - Promptdescribe your morning feeling.
Link. Written with The Most Dangerous Writing App

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Images are from Pixabay:

Christmas by JillWellington
Girl by JillWellington

Banner Freewritehouse credit by @mariannewest.
Banner Mizu no oto and finish the story, credit by @f3nix of the tribe @bananafish.
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Simplemente Gracias

For your kind reading, simply THANK YOU




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Reminds me of C.S. Lewis's quote about miracles: "Miracles are a retelling in small letters of the very same story which is written across the whole world in letters too large for some of us to see." Source.

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A considerable contribution that completes the intention that resulted in the writing of this free paper. Thank you!

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