Poltergeist

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Poltergeist

It was her, I'm more than sure. Her fake, silly, perfect little girl face can't fool me. The way she looks at me only confirms her wrongdoing. I know it was my sister who hid my bag of blueberry-scented cardamom coffee. Doesn't she know what it costs me to get it? Maybe she does and that's why she wants to bother me.


I walk into the living room and there she is with my parents watching TV. She looked at me sideways; she did it for like a minute. She gave me a mischievous smile and then covered her mouth with her hand. Her flippant attitude made me even more suspicious of her guilt.

"Mom, Dad, haven't you seen my bag of special coffee?" I asked. They all turned to look at me at the same time.

"I don't know son," My mother replied. "You always keep it in your room, and I don't mess with your stuff."

"I haven't seen it either," My father asserted. "You didn't put it somewhere else and don't remember?"

"No, if I had I would remember, I'm always watching where I put things... What about you, Chris?" Referring to my sister. "Have you seen my coffee bag?"

She looked at me squinting her eyes as if she was lazy to answer me.

"I don't know, I haven't seen anything like it, just the coffee kept in the cupboard."

I didn't believe her but decided to act normal, as I didn't want to form a drama in front of my parents. I returned to my room and threw myself on the bed angrily. If I confronted lying to Chris, all it would do was cause her to make fun of me, and if, on the other hand, I did nothing, I would write off my bag of special coffee and she would always scoff at that. I couldn't allow that, so amid my anger, I came up with a devious plan.

My house is huge and very old. The walls are made of cedar wood. Between them, there is a separation that generates narrow paths where only a very thin person can pass. These connections are directly linked to the attic, that is, from this part of the house, one can enter behind the walls and walk between them; up or down through the whole place.

This is something I discovered as a child because I have always been a curious explorer. I don't think my parents, nor my sister know about this separation between the walls, as my dad always told us that the walls were so solid and united that not even a rat could get between them.

I planned to make my sister think that her room was haunted. Push her into insanity until she confessed where my coffee bag was hidden. I took some clear nylon threads and tied them to the objects in her room. I positioned myself behind the wall to manipulate them from there.

When night fell, I played a soundtrack of ghostly sounds on my phone. She woke up agitated and it was at that moment that I made the objects rise in front of her. I heard her moans of fright, as I taunted behind the wall.

"Chris..." I said in a spectral, sinister, deep voice. "You have taken something that doesn't belong to you, you must give it back right now or I will come every night until I take you with me."

"What the fuck...?" She gasped. "This can't be happening! I must be dreaming... Yes, that's it, this is just a dream!"

"I'll prove to you that you're not dreaming," I started banging hard right on the wall behind her. My sister gave a jump along with several piercing screams. She ran out of the room until she reached the kitchen.

I couldn't contain my laughter, but it was time to get out of there because if they didn't see me, they would suspect me. After a few minutes, I went down to the kitchen. I found my parents standing next to Chris; she was still pale with fear. In her hands, she held my coffee bag, looked me in the eyes, and stood up.

"Here, little brother, I'm so sorry I took it. Please forgive me, it won't happen again," I didn't say anything, I just acted surprised. I took my bag of coffee and then went back to my room to put it away. Days went by and Chris still couldn't get into her room. I think I went a little overboard, but, I must confess, I still think it's funny.


THE END

Other publications of my authorship

[ESP-ENG] Crímenes en San Jaín (VI)
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Yes, I think it was a lot of fun, scary for Chris, but he was wrong to grab the coffee!!!!
Very good story, congratulations.

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Thanks. I also think it was a very bad joke that will torture Chris for several days 😅

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Hello @universoperdido
Please edit your cover photo.
The logo is the property of Cinnamon Cup Coffee.
Presenting the logo on your work could be classed as plagiarism, even without such intent.
Thanks!

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Sorry, I had no idea. I just edited it already. I will take it into account from now on. Thanks for the heads up.

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I took some clear nylon threads

This alone had me in stitches.
Your entire approach and the executed plan were gold!
Well-written too:)
I'm still laughing 🤣
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I'm glad it made you laugh. I've thought about various tortures, but what better than psychological torture with ghosts 😂😂😂

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but what better than psychological torture with ghosts 😂😂😂

I'll remember that one 🤣

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I liked the torture, Chris should never have stolen the coffee. Congratulations, excellent story.

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No, she should not have. Now she will have that image etched in her mind for a long time. Thank you for reading.

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Wow. Well thought out revenge. I liked it. Haha. I hope she's able to get over the trauma

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I think she will have that mark for life. Thanks for reading 😁😁😁

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A good balance of suspense, humor, and complexity that makes your story enjoyable. I really enjoyed your story hehehe. The setting, the old house and the hidden spaces behind the walls adds a sense of mystery and wonder, making it more intriguing and captivating for me. Oh Chris! 😂. I say no more. Amazing writing 👍

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Thank you for your comment @esther-emmanuel. I'm glad you liked it. You have to take advantage of the good elements that there is scope to make a good torture.

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Wickedly imaginative. Wow! Please remind me never to cross you (shake, rattle….), the outcome, would, clearly, not be good.
Hilariously brilliant!

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Ha ha ha ha! I can be very charismatic and sweet, but when they mess with something precious of mine, I can be a nightmare 😁😈

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How bad, I could laugh at everything you did in the plot. Poor little sis must have been so scared she decided to give up the coffee. Fear can do anything. Great, you see how you are

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I don't think I've been cruel enough, but I'll settle for it. If I had that ability, I could make jokes like that.

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I guess I'm not good at it either, but I think it was a bit strong for the poor little sister. :)

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I planned to make my sister think that her room was haunted.

🤣one hell of a plan you got there, I can only imagine her fear. The plan worked so fast I was thinking she might hold out a few more days.

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How mean you are hahahaha 🤪 well it was about revenge, a little scare wasn't bad.

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Something to awaken the organs and put the senses on alert. Thank you for your comment, friend.

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Great! this ghostly torture could not be less coming from you @universoperdido hahahaha excellent output! from start to finish, cheers!

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Hahaha! Thank you very much, my friend. I'm glad it made an impact on you.

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As always with your stories, they are great 👍

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I said it in a comment in another post and I will reiterate it here: Coffee is sacred! A good proof of that is what the character in your story does to get it back. I enjoyed the read, it kept me on edge from beginning to end. What a scare the girl got. Excellent work, friend.

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I completely agree. No one should mess with coffee, least of all if it's someone's private thing, as you don't know what twisted mind you may be offending. Thanks for reading me, my friend. I'm glad you liked my story.

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