RE: [[ESP/ENG]] LA CLAQUETA DE CATIA: REBOUND, LA LEYENDA DE EARL "THE GOAT" MANIGAULT // CATIA CLAPPERBOARD: REBOUND, THE LEGEND OG EARL "THE GOAT" MANIGAULT
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Translating is really tiresome so kudos to you for helping more people be able to enjoy this Blockchain.
Your post suffers from the way you are editing it, putting both versions of the text side by side create two gigantic and unappealing walltexts. Which gets even worse on mobile.
Try making the full post in one language then right after that you do the same thing with the translated version. This way you can edit better, use headers and dividers and make it easier to read, helping your audience.
Also, smaller paragraphs and more dots, no need for a rundown sentence of 5-6 lines before a dot
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Thanks fot the appreciation. I'll take your advices, but there are paragraphs that may not be short, because the content is dense and i need to develope it to make the audience understand well the content and not be like pages on internet that are mediocre or poor for people who valorate well written information, otherwise the books that we read were 40 pages long.
Take care and thank you.
You can keep all the content you wrote and still reduce paragraph size. I'm not saying to cut out parts of your post, I'm saying that you can take your 10 lines paragraphs and use better punctuation, hit the enter key on the middle of it.
Like your reply, you got really big sentences without even a comma, try reading your post/reply out loud without losing breath. It's difficult right?
About well written articles, you can write well and be concise. For sure a succinct 500 word posts is way better than a 3k repetitive.
Great, I'll keep it. Thanks a lot.