RE: Out of Hand

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a good poem with a nice theme.

I like the structure you use with the similar opening lines to the stanzas, and a short punchy closing line.

in line four of the 4th stanza I'd suggest you could write it as Without end in sight to bring it closer to the other three closing lines.



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Awwnn. Thank youuu!
Your words are well noted.😊

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