[haiku] "lilac"
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her slightest whisper,
silent lilacs blossom white --
melody of spring.
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*Photo by Sonia Kuniakina on Unsplash
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her slightest whisper,
silent lilacs blossom white --
melody of spring.
*Photo by Sonia Kuniakina on Unsplash
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I loved your haiku. how many things in nature happen in silence! We could learn a lot from that. Thank you.
Thank you for your kind words.
I had ever done a haiku before, so I am sorry if it's technically inaccurate. I tried to respect the 5-7-5 adaptation to English, but in all honesty it was all the product of a Friday night blunt, lol.
I just enjoy writing challenges, don't know why. The 5-7-5 seemed a fun one to try.
Careful, because I may end up burping more ^^
I feel this post needs more write up.. I'm just trying to be honest with you. It really didn't pass any message across and there is nothing to understand from this post.
Adding more words to this can make it a better post.
This is my opinion though..
This was a play of words, and I was trying to follow the Haiku standard of 5-7-5. It was also something that simply came after I got a little altered on a Friday night after a week at work. Not planned. If I were to make the effort of writing up those words you are asking for, the post probably wouldn't exist at all. I would have thought too much about it, and I would have likely ended up feeling ashamed of posting.
Even though I understand an "explanation" may be useful for some, I am sorry but I don't intend to provide any. That won't change, at least for the time being.
Thanks for your comment.
Thanks for your explanation.. I think I understand better now. I appreciate
Just in case, also:
A Haiku is a traditional form of Japanese poetry comprised of 3 verses with 5-7-5 syllables. Therefore 17 syllables in total. I couldn't add more words to the poem if I wanted to.
I guess I have learnt something new today. This is is so interesting. I never knew something like this existed. I am sorry with the way I came up to you.. I understand better now
Very nice haiku, I hope to encourage me to make one someday, always silences speak more than words, blessings and happy day ☺.
Thank you for your kind words.
This was my first Haiku; if it serves of anything I'd say not thinking too much about it really helps in it becoming more than silence. Just let it out ;)
Wow, this is wonderful! Very nice images. Keep them coming, please!
BTW (addressing some of your other comments) I'm not a big fan of the 5/7/5 syllable thing, which I feel doesn't work in English to the same effect as in Japanese. But you choose your words nicely and it fits within that well.