hive open mic week 206-"Poesía"-garis terdepan-fiersa besari(cover song)by:samuelstifen

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Hello #openmic community friends,
I am @samuelstifen.
And now, the openmic event has entered week 206. This event is truly amazing and provides a lot of positive things and many lessons about music, Hive, and learning to edit my performance videos better. I have learned a lot from this community and other communities. For me, it is an extraordinary thing to be able to learn even better.

For Hive Open Mic 206, the following theme is: "Poesía," which means "Poetry." This theme was chosen by: @cesaramos.

This theme choice is extraordinary because by imagining this theme, we can mix poetry works with our singing works here.

Poetry is a creative and imaginative language. Poetry often expresses the feelings, thoughts, or experiences of the writer through carefully chosen words, unique rhythms, and a structure different from prose. Poetry can also have deep meanings and can be interpreted in various ways by readers according to their own experiences and understanding.

Today, I will present a little poetry from my covered song. And one of the poems I will present today is a poem by Mr. Fiersa Besari titled "Untukmu." (for you)

Fiersa Besari, S.S. is a writer, YouTuber, and musician from Indonesia. As a writer, Fiersa has produced six novels. He is also involved as one of the founders of the Book Addict Community. He is also active as a hiking YouTuber. His famous YouTube episodes include "Sebuah Jurnal."
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I admire his work because each meaning of his songs and poetry has a meaning about life, love, and friendship.

Perhaps for me, Fiersa Besari is one of the role models for me because each of his works provides motivation about life.

And for the song I am singing, one of Fiersa Besari's works titled "Garis Terdepan." (forefront).
The song "Garis Terdepan"(forefront)by Fiersa Besari broadly tells the story of someone's struggle with love using the method of sincerity. The song depicts someone who always strives to give their best for the good of the person they love, sincerely and without expecting anything in return, although deep down, they always hope because they love deeply. The song highlights the sincerity of someone's heart in loving and helping others without mercy.

That's all I can give for my performance and presentation of today's theme. I hope that what I have presented this week, my friends, will enjoy my work. And thank you to OpenMic and all those who have participated in this event for making OpenMic a place for me and musicians to learn and understand music here. I hope my performance can provide an extraordinary experience, and even though there may be some mistakes, I apologize and hope that what I have presented today, my friends, will enjoy. THANKYOU

LYRICH-POETRY-UNTUKMU

Untukmu
Yang pernah datang
dan mengubah segala rencana
Yang pernah menghentikan segala gundah gulana
Untukmu Yang pernah menjadikan hari-hariku kembali berwarna Yang pernah membuatku kembali percaya pada renjana

Maaf Atas segala hal kecil yang membuatmu marah
Atas niat baikku yang selalu kau pandang salah
Aku tak pernah mengerti kenapa bagimu pergi selalu mudah? Sementara,
Bagiku meninggalkanmu adalah hal yang paling susah
Kita berubah dari kekasih yang saling berjuang menjadi sepasang musuh yang saling berperang
Tanpa kita sadari kisah kita hangus jadi arang dan kita tidak punya lagi jalan pulang

Terima kasih
Karenamu,
Aku belajar membuka hati untuk saling memberi arti
Karenamu juga,
Aku belajar berbesar hati untuk melihat perasaanmu mati

ENGLISH VERSION

For You
Who once came
and changed all plans
Who once stopped all worries
For you Who once made my days colorful again Who once made me believe in dreams again

Sorry For all the little things that made you angry For my good intentions that you always saw as wrong I never understood why leaving was always easy for you? While, For me, leaving you is the hardest thing
We changed from lovers who fought for each other to a pair of enemies fighting each other
Without us realizing, our story turned to ashes and we no longer have a way back

Thank you
Because of you,
I learned to open my heart to give meaning to each other
Also because of you,
I learned to be big-hearted to see your feelings die
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LYRICH SONG-GARIS TERDEPAN

Bilur makin terhampar dalam rangkuman asa
Kalimat hilang makna logika tak berdaya

Di tepian nestapa hasrat terbungkam sunyi
Entah aku pengecut entah kau tidak peka
Kumendambakanmu mendambakanku

Bila kau butuh telinga tuk mendengar
Bahu tuk bersandar raga tuk berlindung

Pasti kau temukanku di garis terdepan
Bertepuk dengan sebelah tangan

Kau membuatku yakin malaikat tak selalu bersayap
Biar saja menanti tanpa batas tanpa balas

Tetap menjelma cahaya di angkasa
Yang sulit tertampik dan sukar tergapai
Kumendambakanmu mendambakanku

Bila kau butuh telinga tuk mendengar
Bahu tuk bersandar raga tuk berlindung

Akulah orang yang selalu ada untukmu
Meski hanya sebatas teman
Yakin kau temukanku di garis terdepan
Bertepuk dengan sebelah tangan

ENGLISH VERSION

The crystals spread further in the summary of hope
Meaningless sentences, powerless logic

On the edge of despair, desires silenced in silence
I don't know if I'm a coward or you're just insensitive
I long for you, longing for me

When you need an ear to listen
A shoulder to lean on, a body to take shelter

Surely you'll find me on the front line
Clapping with one hand

You make me believe that angels don't always have wings

Let it wait endlessly, without reciprocation
Still manifesting as light in the sky
Difficult to resist and hard to reach
I long for you, longing for me

When you need an ear to listen
A shoulder to lean on, a body to take shelter

I am the one who is always there for you
Even if only as a friend
Believe that you'll find me on the front line
Clapping with one hand
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Wow beautiful you show great emotion and connection to the song. Where do you get this singing talent from? It's so super dope.

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Thank you bro for coming, I learned to sing just learning from YouTube, there are lots of lessons on YouTube about singing, I hope you can see it, thank you for coming, have a nice day

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Me encantó como tocas la guitarra muy buena interpretación

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